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By : sevinofme
  • From EmbersEye on June 29, 2008
    Curiouser and curiouser. ^^ I await the next installment.
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  • From arumlily on March 02, 2007
    Post more? *nudges and gives you puppy dog eyes* Please? I'll be very good...
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  • From ANON - Dark Iasha on July 15, 2006
    Wow!This is a great fic!I love it so much.I mean,the history is lovely.It has so much detail and emotions.I feel so sorry for Daisuke,having to contain Krad.Satoshi shouldn't have to go near a being such as that demon.And will Dai-chan be able to resist?
    Umm,if I could suggest this,could you put that Dark cares for Daisuke?And that when he's in pain,Dark can feel it?Its just an idea and I hope you like it.If you don't then forget about it.I got it when I read the part where Daisuke says "Dark.,..save me.".Its so sad.
    Update soon?
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  • From ANON - Tac on December 08, 2005
    I really like this story but I'm not the biggest fan of the extra characters - of course I am obsessed with Satoshi/Daisuke and Dark/Krad angst-ness ^_^. I hope to see updates and more angsty tension, right? ^_^
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  • From ANON - itachi ano on October 27, 2005
    Oh, I missed this! This is just a great story! If the manga turned out like this has so far, I'd die happy! Poor Niwa-kun! And Dark hasnt gotten to Hiwatari-kun yet? Amazing! If it was me, I'd either be nuts now, or I'm pretty sure i'd be able to get Dark willingly, if not doggedly, trying to find a way to return to Niwa-kun! ^^lol I don't think he'd appreciate my femmie wiles.^^lol If I had him in my head, he'd be going nuts with all the lovely images I cook up with him, Krad, Satoshi, Niwa-kun, and Hiwatari-kun! ^^hee hee

    Well, I think I've finally beaten the habit from going to ff.net! ^^ I have some twitches and almost breaking moments, but, hopefully, my will is strong! ^^lol I swear, I've never smoked, but I'm glad I never started, because I think this is how a person trying to quit feels! ^^lol

    I have gotten to volume 7 of DNAngel! ^^ (I'm so proud!lol) I would have number 8, but the evil book store I go to wont realize what we anime fans want and order it!! Grrr!!! I already have 3 books ordered anyways, so I shouldnt order another one, or I won't be able to pay for it! ^^lol They /do/ have number 9 there. I refuse to buy it though, until I can at least /read/ number 8, if not own it... Its getting harder to say no though! (cries)
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  • From ANON - Sit-Sit on October 24, 2005
    POST MORE SET!!!! COME ON!
    *puppy dog face*
    PWEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - ... on October 19, 2005
    Please update chapter 4! I may be on chapter 2 now, but I'm betting I'm gonna wanna read the rest once I finish chapter 3!

    Great perspective and ideas! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on August 03, 2005
    OMG!!! *hugs you and gives you chocolates* This is amazing!!! I love it!!! *more sentimental mushy stuff* ^^ In all seriousness, you've done a wonderful job with this fic -- it's an excellent idea, and your descriptions and characterizations are amazing......even if the legend was a bit cliché! (lol) ^___~ I look forward to finding out what happens next, so keep up the good work and update ASAP, k? ^___^ Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on August 02, 2005
    Hello.

    This was my first time reading a DNAngel fanfic, and I must say I love it. I wish the creator of the anime and manga would have put D+S together and give us a shonen-ai. I look forward to your next update, which I hope will be soon.

    rAiNwAtEr
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  • From ANON - mandie on July 29, 2005
    Great fic. Umm, I always thought that the Niwa's came from Daisuke's mom's side, but in here you got it as his dad's side. I don't know if you're right and I'm wrong or not. I just thought I'd point that out. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - itachi ano on July 14, 2005
    *sniffles* I, sort of, feel bad for Krad now! I feel like i'm cheatin by readin this, since I only have the seventh volume of DNAngel... I love it tho! My fav pairings are, of course, Dai/Sat and Krad/Dark... ^^ I think you've really got all the characters down! And no Risa or Riku in site! ^^ I'm glad! Not many authors can pull this kind of thing off! I can't wait till the next chapter! ^^ I hope it'll be here soon!

    I have problems with your other stories tho... You see, I can't go onto fanfiction.net anymore, since it only kills my computer with viruses... Is there any way you can maybe email them to me or put them here on adultfanfic? I haven't checked your author page on here yet, so if they are already on here, ignore this, but if they aren't could you put the two stories on here? I would really like to read them! ^^ I'll be happy to review them by email if you wish me to do so! ^^ Thank you!

    itachi ano**
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  • From ANON - darkangel on June 14, 2005
    i really like this story so far... nice twist with krad in daisuke and dark in satoshi..and how satoshi sorta wishes to keep dark and get rid of krad, or not have to deal with him anymore. i like!! keep on writing please! ^_^
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  • From ANON - chrnokitty on June 12, 2005
    Great story keep it up~why is it that in every great story I read my koi*Krad* gets raped and has a bad, traumatising past?
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 29, 2005
    I like this story so far.

    I can't recall if this is slated to be an au or not. But I think it should at least be a slight au.

    Considering that Kosuke is not of the Niwa blood. Emiko is. The reason why she is so obsessed with Dark and her training her son to be a theif is not only because he father was once Dark, but also because she couldn't be Dark.

    He only showed in males of the Niwa clan, blood relatives, It is something genetic. Which is why the series is called, D.N.Angel, dna and angel.

    Also Dark calls Daisuke's mom, Emiko-Chan, he has known her since she was little.

    While he was not able to possess Emiko-Chan he was their watching her grow up. Which is why a younger Emiko-Chan was in the mirror world, as Dark's loves.

    Also Satoshi's name, (that he likes to be called) is not Hikari (he hates the family), but Hiwatari, after his adobted father, the Chief of Police.

    Also I don't think Satoshi would go to a library to find information on the painting, considering of both the Niwa and Hikair private libraries, in the houses.

    I know that Satoshi lives in an apartment, but there is a main house somewhere, or something that contains the information for each artifact of the Hikari's.

    I can't remember how big the Niwa library is but I know that it is downstairs somewhere, in their house.

    They wouldn't have the precious information on the Hikari artifacts laying around just anywhere, now would they?

    They would have to keep close tabs on it.

    Also where is Toki-Chan, the statue who went into the Mirror with Daisuke who wanted to save Dark?

    Also wasn't there a line that mentioned, that somehow all of the Hikari's work end up in the Niwa's hands?

    I really hope that the D.N.Angel series answers the questions on the Feud.

    I want to know what is up with Dark and Krad, and why the feud started in the first place.



    Anyways, I love the story so far. Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Kili-chan on May 29, 2005
    wooooow. that was really good!! and the whole legened thing fit so well. especially the fire and ice, light and dark part! ah, it matches there hair X3 how cool. bwahaha. welp, please update for muah. Cheers!!^o^
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