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Reviews for Grand Theft Auto: Nerima

By : Kyva
  • From ANON - Rio Grande on June 29, 2005
    p.s - Um, sorry, I love Tears for Fears as much as the next crazed fan, but that scene in Donnie Darko when they're just zooming in on everyone's faces and Gary Jules is playing in the back... come on. That's kick ass. That makes Gary Jules kick ass.
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  • From ANON - Rio Grande on June 29, 2005
    I love this fic. I just love it. It's too awesome, and I'm sorry I never reviewed before this because it's just so funny and well written and clever. I love how utterly out of character everyone is, and simultaneously how pitifully in character some people are in these ridiculously terrible situations. The dialogue is wonderful and makes me laugh out loud, and I have to admit I'm just waiting for the chapter when Ranma and Akane finally talk. I guess it doesn't seem as though Akane has changed so much, at least not like Ranma has, but I was sort of hoping she'd be as cracked out as he is just to even their relationship out. My only complaint is that Shampoo came off as a little too weak, I mean, she's supposed to be a match for Ranma, not an easy hit for some beefy guys outside a club. And Sheela can be a bit much, and Ukyo's a little MIA, but I don't know why I'm bringing all of this up because this has really turned into one of my favorite Ranma fics of all time. And there are some really amazing Ranma fics out there. Actually, I'd have to say that in the past couple years you're one of the only authors to develop a new, decent Ranma 1/2 fanfiction. It's like everyone else up and died! So, thanks for that, and I'm really sorry to hear about your finger... that's really bad, and tragic sounding. But, if you could, keep writing, that would be great.
    xoxo
    Rio

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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 29, 2005
    So what exactly did Bugsy ask him to do? Next chapter, right? You cut your finger off, seriously? Ouch... Don't suppose they were able to sew it back on or something? Well, looking forward to the next chunk, am willing to wait as long as neccessary. Laters!
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on June 29, 2005
    Having had run ins with power tool failure, I can sypmathize. BUT GOD DAM.


    Anyway. OH YEAH!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 14, 2005
    And the plot thickens...and thickens....and thickens! What could this Busy really be up to, I wonder? And will their little mass-money making plan actually work? Can't wait for the next one! Laters!
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  • From ANON - BlackRosePhantom on June 12, 2005
    Maybe you already know this or maybe someone else pointed it out before...but you should use 'definietly' in place of 'defiantly.' Unless of course that was your intent.
    If so, you are such a creative rebel. :P
    PS, Why did Shampoo cut her hair?! Noooooo!!!
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  • From ANON - BlackRosePhantom on June 12, 2005
    Hi again.
    I still disapprove of Grand Theft Auto, as well as the negative actions of the characters here. But I'm contect that Ranma is a hero like Punisher, and that he will clean up the town. Also, get his mom and ex-gf out. Please complete this story. I LUV IT.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 04, 2005
    Well, at least they're relatively all right. Nice to know, though it *is* kind of sad that Shampoo had to cut her hair ( :( )... Any chance of Ukyo popping in for a brief cameo? Ah, well, back to business. 100K, huh? This should be fun... Laters!
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  • From ANON - hentairoses on May 29, 2005
    You done a good combine Ranma 1/2 and Grand Theft Auto. The Nermia gang didn't end up like the way you thought the would end up as. Like Nabiki being a stripper, Soun and Genma durken loots, or that Ryoga would of cheated on Akane after finally getting a chance to date her and stuff. I did think that Ranma and Ryoga tende to get a little bitchy at time especial at the strip bar about Ryoga watching Ranma-chan do her thing, considering she ask him to do those kind of thing to get in with the boss. But kind of cleared that up in chapter six with that there more like sibilings then anthing else, but it seeems Shelly has other ideas.

    Anyway great fic and I can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on May 29, 2005
    Okay, not bad. And with Ranma's track record, this badass holding Akane could even be another Jusenkyo victim wanting to get a little payback for his new "lifestyle". Who knows...well, okay, you do, oh great and masterful author. I'll be waiting on chap. 7! Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on May 14, 2005
    Weel, at least she was alive up unti now. Blackjack, huh? That's my personal debt maker of choice, too... Now the question becomes, can they rescue her before Jasper actually DOES decide to kill her? And we still haven't seen our favorite Chinese Amazons! I'd really like to see how they're getting on, or...not... Whatever...
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on May 13, 2005
    Chapter 5 was great. Looking for more as you write new chapters. :)
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on May 05, 2005
    Oh, yeah, and nice handling of Genma, the jerk! Now, about them Amazons?
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on May 05, 2005
    Huh, I didn't think they were away that long... Well, at least we have a lead, and thank you for explaining the absence of Tofu, much obliged. So what exactly are Nodoka and Kasumi doing for money at present? Working at a grocery store, perhaps? A restaurant? Well, get the next chapter out soon, cause I wanna know who all's waiting back at the dojo!
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 04, 2005
    No. Words. Should. Have. Sent. A. Poet.
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