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Reviews for Forbidden Fruit

By : Amako
  • From CagedObsession on December 14, 2008
    I know the fear that pre-empts one's first lemon post! I think you did a wonderful job and I enjoyed your flowing use of adjectives and similes! "Crashing back against hers like a tidal wave," how brilliantly spoken. Keep up the great work. I'll be taking a look at your other works!
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  • From momijik on August 12, 2007
    That was really incredible! I can't believe that was your first attempt! I really enjoyed Chrno Crusade when I watched it this spring and your story really sparked my interest. I don't really think they are out of character.. I mean I could see Chrno acting that way when he goes into his full demon form so I don't think it is unreasonable to think he could be that way given the situation they were in.

    I could see her becoming submissive to him like that, in a sexual situation. I could really see that.

    So bravo on this story. I really enjoyed it and I hope you will write more stories in the future. The two I have read here are some of the best AFFN have to offer.
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  • From ANON - Joan Reverie on October 12, 2006
    I'm too lazy t'sign-in.
    But I liked it.
    So far this is my first time reading A CC fan fic.
    It was rather stimulating if I do say so myself.
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  • From ANON - Natasha on October 12, 2006
    I was great. It was a little OOc. but it was good. and do not be sorry about what you write. You should never feel bad about how you feel about things.
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  • From ANON - BC1 on September 09, 2006
    I love it! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - kariiiiii. on September 04, 2006
    This was SOOOOOO good!The best lemon in who knows when!
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  • From ANON - Sephyira on September 04, 2006
    Oh,my god.That was so enticing.It wasn't dark in those kind of feared,twisted ways.I really liked it...it has more of an alluring tone...like drawing someone in...wow...I totally idolize you as of today.Even if it WAS just ONE story..but,hey.That was extremely fantastic.
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  • From morgansgirl23 on August 24, 2006
    This story was great. I really think that you did a good job, what with this being your first adult fanfic, and I didn't have any problems at all with writing. I look forward to reading more of your works in the future.
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  • From ANON - Forever... on August 09, 2006
    Wow....I mean...HOLY SHIT THAT WAS HOOOOOOT!!!!!
    O.O...Phew,I`m all flushed!^^;;No,really,this is your forsat lemon???????Holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!I sqwear,this is teh best lemon I`ve raed in the mean tiem!Wow...You`re amazing!Please ,write more!You`re really good!This was amazing and I hope to see more of your works!The darkness was a great touch!I loved this story! *evil grin*I`ll wait for more!

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  • From ANON - Mela Kenzu on July 08, 2006
    Awww, I was gonna jus leave, but then you went and said please review. ^ ^ It was a nice story, and surprisingly as religious as I am sometimes, I wasn't offended at all. Poor Chrno, wanting that feisty nun, but only getting to 'taste' of her once. Maaaan, I wish something like this would actually happen on the series.

    On to a serious note, they did seem a bit OOC, but people usually don't act just the same during sex. It's a carnal feelings after all, so I wouldn't worry about it. I really liked it, and considering I've been hunting a good ChrnoRossette all day, I'm quite happy now (haha, and I've only watched episode 1 and part of 2...it's an addictive series, ne?)
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  • From ANON - nimblnymph on February 03, 2006
    Well, I personally loved this! I didn't think anyone was too blatantly ooc to bitch about it. But, seeing as I tend to enjoy the darker stuff, maybe I just didn't notice? Anyway, I think this has to be the better ones for this category. No offense intended to anyone else out there... but it IS! Anyway, good job on it. Now I'm going to go watch it again... and cry like a baby teething at the end!
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  • From ANON - digital blasphemy on January 16, 2006
    i've seen much scarier stuff trust me, this was sweet in a BP kinda way :p
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  • From ANON - Majia on December 27, 2005
    @.@ -faints- chrono...to sexy for heaven, earth, hell, fire...holy crap if i didn't think he was sexy before this fanfic did it -drools-
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  • From ANON - Felecia on December 26, 2005
    That was the best Chrno, Rosette fanfiction yet! It was indeed a wise decision on doing a dark twist, it seem to pull out the side of Chrno that we know is there, and not just the side that's sweet and kind. Your style of writing was awesome too, I hope to read more from you ! Thumbs up! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Forfirith on December 11, 2005
    Wow!! This fic is truly amazing! Best ChrnoxRosette I've ever read ^^
    You should do more of this pairing :D
    I like the dark and demanding Chrno, much better than the submitting one and all guilty consumed... >:)
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