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Reviews for Possessed

By : seraskelia
  • From seraskelia on April 26, 2005
    To Cate: Thanks for your review. I'm not sure what word choice you are referring to and wish you would have left more details. I usually don't use a beta reader on any of my fics (and usually get good reviews) but post my fics on my LiveJournal and read comments of people on my Friend's List. I did correct the spelling error (can't believe I missed that). I changed some of the wording to improve the flow but didnt' see any other grammar mistakes besides the spelling. If you could offer more details about what words were "jarring" I would appreciate it. I am always trying to improve my writing. This story seemed harder to write then most.
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  • From ANON - Cate on April 25, 2005
    I enjoyed the story, but was distracted by the short sentences and grammar mistakes. Priests and nuns make vows, not vowels. Some of your word-choice was rather jarring, as well. A beta reader would help your story immensely.
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