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Reviews for After Dinning

By : clearsprings
  • From moonwitch on October 22, 2007
    oh i am in lemon heaven.He is so cute even thou they kinda portry him in love woth Yuki.He has such the bad boy look. Great story!
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  • From ANON - TheChicChick on December 29, 2005
    You are a good writer and I hope you continue to write. Please tell me if you write anymore stories! tnx.
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  • From ANON - Talia on April 27, 2005
    you should probably reread your story. I was going to put the spelling/ grammer problems in the review but there are a lot. But your story is good and with correcting, it could be great. please email me if you have any questions.
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  • From ANON - renusuru on April 26, 2005
    that was completely awsome no critacisom from me i give it to tumbs up
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  • From on April 26, 2005
    Oh man dis be great here right hturr man hey wow im ur first SHIBBY!!!! rock on i lik ur writn dude or dudet got me rlly goin der man phew i thnk ima need a smoke listn to my commi (communist) an hippy side
    Hippy-Dude u set the groove man its lik a good jive but still prrty low jus try n raise it a bit mkay btw add a bunch of BJs in ur next story peace yo Commi-Oi de bloody story be good i likd it but u can do more try an put some rough action into it more lik maybe anal ehehehhe well cheerio thn. Btw thnks for reviewn my frens fic btw dude she be named dark avenger jus helpn another dude out.
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