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  • From ANON - Ero-Bontenmaru on February 07, 2006
    Very interesting. I'm very intrigued to see were you take this story.
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  • From ANON - spiritwolf on February 02, 2006
    Well the story is good I really like it. Was glad you finally updated the story after a couple of months well its better that saying you will update but don`t oh well I really like your story so keep up the good work oh yeah I perfer reading stories with male and female and sometimes female ad female pairing but I don`t read stories with YAOI I have nothing against it its not the kind of stories I perfer to read oh well keeep up the good work and update soon
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  • From ANON - Trouble on January 27, 2006
    *raucous applause* about time u got up off yaw ass on this one :P *hug* congratulations on ur new chapter. the fleshing out process is going rather well. flesh...heh. ahEm. i hope this spurt of feverish creativity is sustainable and j00 write more... WRITE MORE!!!! *blushes... * i should buckle down and do some work on MY story... u give me incentive! *is all fired up* and some action at last! (no matter how breif :P *blasts off to right teh ebil shmex scene* uh, quick question b4 i go, why do i type with emticons? :S
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  • From ANON - Firestorm on January 27, 2006
    Nice aspect you've got going on here. Realistic scenes. It's not going too fast, nor too slow. So bravo!
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  • From ANON - mellowdonatello on August 12, 2005
    i really like this story. i hope that i get to read more of it soon!
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  • From ANON - lala on August 08, 2005
    that was good~ yu should write a lot more!!
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  • From ANON - Saico on July 27, 2005
    Interesting. You're building up great anticipation. Your teasing moments are nice you should write more of those.

    For future fics, you've got Rei's and Minako's personalities completely switched. Minako is behaving as Rei'd do, and vice versa.
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  • From ANON - furlynn on July 24, 2005
    Ohh, very intruiging! Well written and excelent plot! Please continue to update.
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  • From ANON - Firestorm on July 24, 2005
    I finally read the second chapter. It's good so far. I'm sure it will get more intruiging as time goes on. It does have an air of mystery to it which is good. It sets the emotions forth for the characters. Some pointers, since you're using their Japanese names, the Japanese always use their last names first before their first names when introducing themselves to someone. Just thought you'd like to know. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2005
    hey this si ok i guess AFF isnt for compelling storyline anyway lets see some action.
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  • From ANON - Firestorm on June 16, 2005
    I'm sorry it took me so long to read this. I finally got a chance to. The drama in this was very good as were the descriptions. I'll admit I was a bit surprised at reading some of the more detailed parts, but then again it's adult fiction, lol. I guess I'm more used to the words penis and vagina.. stuff like that.. ^^; The plot seems to be hidden somewhat, but that's good. It brings out the curiousity in the reader. All in all, I think you write very well and have a wonderful sense of imagination.
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  • From ANON - Trouble on June 04, 2005
    Will be interesting to see how this develops... tantalizing bits here and there get the juices flowin... cant wait to see how the writer... er... fleshes out his story. :)
    hoorray for boobies and thongs!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zorin on May 18, 2005
    MORE MORE MORE!
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