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By : PrincessMoonStar15
  • From charmingwitch on January 07, 2009
    so freaking good please continue it. i can't wait.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - moonstiger2002 on February 19, 2006
    I like the story alot. It has a good plot line im trying to get enough storios together to begin my own site and this would be a welcome addition when finished. However it could do with some editing there are quite a few spelling errors and word mik-ups. It took away from the story to have to stop and try to figure out what word was suposed to be there and just little things like typing him when it should of been his ect.
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  • From ANON - dazz on February 12, 2006
    This story is so funny and nice to read!!!!!! Are you planning to continue it in the future?

    Please let me know if you do it =)
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  • From ANON - MakoKam on January 09, 2006
    UPDAte PlEASE =) This is a great story -- definitely some grammar mistakes, but the outline is great!! Please update the next chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 18, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 19, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From morgansgirl23 on September 11, 2005
    I'm a huge fan of this story. Please, please, please update a again soon. Even with the grammer errors it's still a good fanfic!
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  • From ANON - The Editing Fairy on July 16, 2005
    Here. I fixed it. It's a present.
    -Editing Fairy


    Who’s Mr. Shields?
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    Serena was having the worst day of her life. Not only was she late to class which Miss. H gave her detention and a report on why a person should be on time, that needed to be 3,000 words, due by tomorrow, but she had that “Learning It By Doing It” thing today. The girls talk her into, plus she giving extra credit for it, which will make her pass. All she wanted to do was go to her home and go to bed, but no, she had to go to that stupid thing today.

    Serena walked into the Arcade and looked around there was Amy, at a big table with papers every where. She had to go to Amy to see who she got. A college kid, who was going to show their life to her, Serena just hoped she got a nice person. She was walking to the table when she hit something or someone very hard. “I’m so sorry about that”

    “What do you know, its meatball head! You can’t even go a day with out hitting someone. And how do you plan to live your life on your own, if you can’t do that?”

    “You JERK!”

    “What? I was only asking a question.”

    “A ques…”

    “What are you doing here today any ways?”

    “I’m doing the program!”

    “What!” Darien LAUGHED?

    “You mean someone go to put up with you for two month. I feel sorry for them.”

    “Excuse me but what about you jerk, Mr. I’m the greatest in the world and I know every thing!” she stuck her tong at him.

    “What do you think I’m doing here, helping those who will learn from it, unlike some people.”

    Serena face was red with anger. She walked away to Amy, to get her stuff on the program. She couldn’t stand him. “I can’t stand him!”

    “Stand who Serena?”

    “Darien, Amy, Darien!”

    “Oh! You know you get extra credit for doing this from Miss. H.”

    “I know that’s why I’m doing it Amy. If I don’t, I won’t pass and I need it.”

    “So you’re doing it for the extra credit”

    “Yep”

    “Oh! Serena you shouldn’t do it for that reason but for the new things it will open up for you” she smile “Here,” and hand Serena, her paper’s to her. Serena looked down at the papers. She needed to see her person everyday for about two hours or more, and in the end to make sure did it, you had to go a couple of papers on the person. Like who they are, where they are living, what they like, who are their friends and family, and etc…. Miss. H want to make sure you did it and not just say you did.

    Serena was reading what she and her person would have to do. Like talk about our lives and what we want to be. She would be going to a couple of the person’s classes and their work and even they home to see how they live. Plus on Spring Break you got to go some where for a week to live life, but that was after the program was done. Which you got to pick it later on after the program was done.

    Serena thought it was going to be so much fun. She looked for her person name “Shields!” “Mr. Shields!” She had a guy, a male, a college guy, and an older guy. Was that a good thing a guy, a male, and who knew about way more then she did? But who was he? She didn’t know the name or a least she thought she didn’t. Well it didn’t mach up to any one she knew, that was in College.

    She walked up to an old man at a table. “Excuse me but do you know, who Mr. Shields is Sir?” The old man looked up at her, and then smiled. Not a nice to meet you, but I know something you don’t smile It was freaking Serena out.

    “Mr. Shields, come here a minute.”

    A minute later she feels someone behind her

    “Yes professor!” she knew that voice, it was…

    “This girl, was looking for you Mr. Shields,” and with at the professor left.

    “Well, Meatball Head.”

    “Y-Your Mr. Shields?”












    Please No, Please Not Her

    “Yes why!”

    “Is there another Mr. Shields?”

    “No why?”

    (This can’t be happing, it just can’t be. My person can’t be Darien. Not the JERK!)

    Darien watched Serena, her face fell after finding out his name. Why? He wanted to know why.

    “Why were you looking for me Serena, and why are you looking at me like that?”

    “You can’t be!”

    “Can’t be what! Standing here.”

    “No! You can’t be Mr. Shields”

    Darien eyes dwindled. What hell is she talking about, “I’m afraid so.” Darien was about to scream, this girl was driving him nuts and he hasn’t even been with her two minutes. Darien looked at her, like she was standing there naked.

    “Now I’ll ask you again. Why were you looking for me, in the first place Serena?”

    Serena looks up at him, Darien wasn’t saying it but yelling it, her mouth open a little bit and her eyes screamed run, run away, far, far away. Darien seen this and was about to shake her when she moved.

    All she could do was point, at his papers in his hand.

    Darien looked at her, when back at the paper in his hand.

    “What about it, GOD SERENA quiet playing around will you, I looking for my person” he turn around and was leaving when he heard a little squeak.

    “What’s the name, on your paper?” was all she could get out.

    Darien turns around so fast you can’t see it. “What,” his eyes were so big, he had it with this girl, what was her problem. And that damn girl was still pointing that his paper. Darien was tried of this game, he just wanted to make the girl shut up and go away. He remembered that she asked him a question, what question was it, oh right the name on his paper.

    “Tsukino! Miss Tsukino!”

    “Oh why me!” The small blonde said. Not looking at Darien any more.

    “Why you what?” He can’t believe he was playing her game.

    “Why did I have to get you, out or all the people in this world, why you?” Darien had be lost sends the first time they started talking, and Serena was now making eye contact him.

    “Excuse me!”

    Serena was red, no scratch that she was pissed, “Why you jerk.”

    As Serena was turning, Darien caught her arm “What,” a very pissed, and tired Darien said.

    “Don’t play stupid with me Darien, Shields but, you know what I mean”

    “Know I don’t!”

    “I’m Miss Tsukino!”

    “What you can’t be, they wouldn’t give me you!”

    “You said it your self Darien you’re the only Mr. Shields in this Program,” with at said Serena handed Darien her paper. Right there in black and white, Darien seen Mr. Shields, D on her paper he can’t believe it, he wouldn’t believe it. Looking there at the papers over and over again, but still couldn’t believe that his person was Meatball Head. “See,” Serena said!

    He looked down at his paper “I don’t think so Serena but my paper said Miss Tsukino, U” he looked back to her and smile.

    “I know that stupid, my first name isn’t Serena it’s Usagi but you don’t know that do you!”

    “What! This can’t be.”

    “Can’t be, what your partner? How do you think I feel? I got the jerk!” Serena was screaming at him. She had her arms crossed in front of her with her nose up in the air.

    Darien couldn’t believe it. He got her, Serena the klutz, this was going to be a long couple of months. Wait maybe he could switch, yes switch .Darien look at Serena then, grabbed her arm and started to drag her away.

    “What are you doing Darien?” Serena said as she jerked her arm out of his hand.

    “Going to the table to see if we can switch,” he looked Serena in the eye then screamed “Amy!”

    “Yes,” Amy looks up and seen one thing she thought she would never see in her life. Here was Darien, with his hand, on Serena’s arm, you know in a lovers kind of way, the weirdest thing was that, Serena wasn’t yelling at Darien and he wasn’t trying to push her a way from him.

    “Amy can you switch us?”

    “Please,” Serena begged giving Amy her pup eyes.

    Amy looked up at them again, she was lost, “switch what?”

    “Will you switch us to different partners, Amy, please?”

    “Serena you mean to tell me you guys are partners in this program?”

    Amy couldn’t help it but laugh, oh this was going to be fun.

    “Stop laughing at us, it’s not funny, Amy!”

    “Amy can you help us or not” Darien can’t believe this Amy was laughing at them. What was so damn funny about it, it was a nightmare.

    “I sorry but you got to ask the professor on that one,” Amy said while turning red from holding in her laughter.

    “What!”

    Darien just rolled his eyes at Serena comment “what professor, Amy?”

    “Professor Daugherty!”

    Darien couldn’t believe it, that man tricked him.

    (Flash Back)
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    “Now class this program will be for a grade.”

    “Professor why do we have to do this program?”

    “It’s going to open you minds, and eyes open, right Mr. Shields.”

    “All we got to do is to tell them about our self and make sure they do their home work,” (how hard can it be)?

    “Now, Mr. Shields do you think it’s that easy”

    “Why not?” (What could go wrong, you get some one and help them with their life big deal.)

    “Well Mr. Shields I guess you’ll have to find out won’t you,” he smiled.

    (I don’t like it, how the professor is looking at me with that smile of his.)

    (End Flash Back)
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    Professor Daugherty did this to him on purpose, just to show him up.

    “Well let’s go talk to him”

    “We can’t Serena!”

    “What, why not?”

    “Because we can’t.”

    “Why?”

    “Just because we can’t, okay.”

    “Than what do you suppose we do, Darien?”

    Darien couldn’t believe he was doing this, “We be partners and do the program together.”

    What did Darien just say, be partners with him, no, was he nuts. “No way Darien, not even in your dreams.”

    (What my dreams, why would I dream about her!) “Well I guess your dropping out then”

    (What, the nerve of this guy!) “No I’m not.”

    “Well I’m not.”

    (Rrrrrrrr I can’t stand this guy but it I don’t I will fail, fine, fine but I swear if he does any thing I’ll kill him.) “Find but their got to be ground rules.”

    (Ground rules?) “Find Serena, what ever.”

    “Not find what ever but yes, got that mister” Serena said while pointing her finger in his face.”

    “Find we’ll meet at my place at 9, got it.” Serena shook her head, man Serena could be scary sometimes. Darien wrote down his address and handed it to her. Then he left but before he got out the door he looked over his shoulder and said “Don’t be late, Meet Ball Head” and he was gone.

    (The nerve of that man!) Things like that had to stop, that was the first of the ground rules being put down. Serena thought (what the hell did I get myself in too.) And with that she left.

    Amy couldn’t believe it Darien and Serena were going to be partners, this was going to be so much fun. She had to call the girls and tell them.














































    Accident Prone Day

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    Serena couldn’t believe it. She took the wrong bus. Man, was she having a bad day. First she slept in and her mom went off on her and then she had to cancel on going to the movies with her friends. But the worst thing about it was that it was all for a man that she didn’t like; her worst enemy, Darien. Darien, the guy that made her life a living hell. The man that goes out of his way to make her life a living nightmare. 'I mean, he never said any thing nice to me. Hell, he always made fun of me. And I’ve go to give up my Saturday to be with that jerk, that pig, that man who can’t get a clue.'

    Serena got off the bus and took out a paper and looked down at it. In her hand was the address, Thin Line Road 1125, floor 9, door 15. Ok, so she’s on the Thin Line Road now where was 1125?

    “Number 1120... 1122... 1123... 1123... 1124... 11-wow!”

    Right in front of Serena was a big building that looked liked it cost a pretty penny to live there. There was NO way Darien lives there. Serena looked at the paper again. “Thin Line Road, 1125.” then she looked back up. She was on Thin Line Road and the building said “1125”. Okay, if she was going to do this then she'd better get going.

    As Serena was walking in the building the door man said “Good day, milady.”

    “Good day, Sir.”

    The old man smiled at her. Serena didn’t know what she did to make the old man so happy. Was there something on her face? Or maybe she had toilet paper stuck on the back of her shoe. Serena looked back to her shoe: Nope, no paper there. "Oh well." she walked on. As soon as she was in the building the doorman fell down laughing. He never in all his years met someone so good looking, polite, and so innocent in his life. But then there she was and she did the funniest thing; she quickly checked herself.

    Serena was walking into the elevator when a woman in red said “Excuse me, Miss, but where do you think you're going?”

    Serena didn’t hear her.


    “Excuse me... MISS!”

    “Huh?” Serena turned around to face a very angry woman.

    “I said where do you think you're going?”

    Serena looked around, and then pointed to herself.

    “Yes, you.” the woman spoke to her as if she owned the world and Serena was just a creature walking on it.

    “I’m here to see Mr. Shields.”

    The woman’s face dropped for a second, then she spoke again like a snob. “Are you sure?”

    “Well, yes. Unless there is more than one Mr. Shields?” Serena didn’t know why she was asking her again, like she would change her answer.

    “What floor is he?” she asked smugly.

    “15th!” her face fell.

    “What's his first name?” she asks again but ever more smugly this time.

    “Darien.” her face fell further. What was her problem? Serena though. Man, what was with the 20 questions?

    'Who the hell is this little girl, and why would she be going to Darien’s apartment on a Saturday morning? Is she his girlfriend? What does he see in her, when he could have me? No, she's got to be his sister or something!' the woman thought to herself.

    “Is he expecting you?”

    “Yes! May I go now? I’m late!”

    “And who are you?”

    “Miss Tsukino!”

    “Oh!” 'They don’t have the same last name.' “Do you guys have a different father?”

    'What kind of question is that?' Serena looked at her as if she had two heads. 'Had she lost her mind? Fathers. Why would we have the same father?' “Oh, no. We’re not brother and sister.”

    The lady’s face fell a little bit. Serena started walking to the elevator. The woman yelled “Friends then?”

    “No!” Serena yelled back and then she was on the elevator.

    The doorman said “Miss Mann, where was the young lady going?”

    “I-” she stared “Mr. Shields.” she said dry mouthed.

    “He’s a lucky man.” she looked up at him with a look that could kill any man. “Mr. Lean, don’t you have a job to do?” she said in frustration.

    The old man looked at her and then went back to the door. 'Man, what a bitch! No wonder she’s still a Miss!'

    'If they're not brother and sister or friends, then what are they? They can’t be boyfriend and girlfriend, they just can’t!' She walked over to the front deck “Michelle, did you see that girl who just left?”

    “Yes.” the girl said.

    “Keep an eye on her, got it?”

    “Sure, but-” she was about to ask whom she was when Miss Mann walked away.

    Serena was on the elevator going up to the 9th floor (7, 8, 9 ho! Here we go.) She turned to the elevator man “Thank you.” and was off. The man looked after her. (I wonder which apartment she’s going to. Well whoever he is, he's a luck man (AN::only guys live on that floor::) Serena was walking down the hallway and finally found the door to his apartment. She knocked and knocked, then looked do at the paper: 9th floor apartment 15. Now she was starting to get mad. He told her to be there at 9:00. It was now 9:25 and she got here at 9:15. That Jerk wasn’t home! Here she was, knocking on his door and he wasn’t answering. Serena fell forward when the door opened. She crashed onto a very sleepy looking Darien. The guy was standing there in a pair of sweats and slippers.

    Serena fell hard onto Darien’s naked chest as he caught her and stopped her fall. Serena fell straight down on Darien. She tried to grab onto him but he didn’t have a shirt on, so she keep on falling down him. Her hands slide down his chest till right above his belly button, that’s where she hit her knees. She shut her eyes while falling, waiting for impact. It was a good thing she shut her eyes, too. For when she fell on her knees she fell forwards and hit Darien in the balls with her head, which made him fall backwards with a yell. When Serena opened her eyes, she screamed. She had fallen on his crotch again, but Darien turned around to crawl away. Serena had her back turned to him. She was too stunned to move, and Darien was just muttering to himself.

    Darien turned around to Serena and opened his mouth. “What the he…” But before he could finish, someone laughed. Not a female laugh, but a deep male laugh.

    He looked up to see his neighbor, John Smith looking at them. “Darien shouldn’t your door be closed when you’re doing the act of passion?” Darien glared at him. If looks could kill, Smith would be a dead man right now.

    “That’s not what we were doing!”

    “Oh! When it was an act of fun and pleasure?” (*meaning a good fuck but no, love*)

    Darien’s face was so red; you couldn’t tell if it was from madness or something else. “No, dumb ass looked at her!” In that instant Darien and John look at Serena, who hadn’t move. “Serena,” Darien crawled over to her, her eyes were closed. “Umm Serena?” Darien grabbed her wrist and read her pulse.

    “Is she ok Darien?”

    “Yes, but I think she fainted!” John scratch, his head. “Hey, John, give me a hand with her, will you?”

    “Sure, Darien.” John and Darien picked her up and heading to the couch “Mmm… Darien?”

    “Yes!”

    “Why would your girlfriend faint over that? I mean, have you guys done it before?”

    Darien dropped Serena but quickly cot her, “No! Serena isn’t my girlfriend!”

    “Oh!” John looked at Serena as they laid her down on the couch. “So she’s a friend with benefits?”

    “No,” Darien said very loud “we’re just partners in a project, that’s all!”

    “Oh. Well then, can I ask her out?”

    “What” Darien quickly looked at him, feeling suddenly sick.

    “You don’t like her, so what’s the problem?”

    “Of course not! It’s just that… IT’S SERENA!”

    John looked on the couch at the girl of his dreams. He didn’t know what was wrong with Darien but that girl was, no that WOMAN, was the sexiest woman he had even see. She was like an angel. “Well I think she’s…”

    They then heard something. They turned back to Serena. She was awake! John watched Darien.

    “Serena” Darien put his hand on her. “Serena are you ok?” She didn't answer him. He was worried. You could see it in his eyes; the only thing that John could ever read in Darien’s eyes… Well, the face for that matter. (Right. He said they’re just partners. OH PLEASE! He can't lie to me. He likes her and not just for a good fuck. Well if he won't say it, then I'll make him.)








    What is this feeling!
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    Before you read chapter 4, chapter 3 was edited by someone else and chapter 4 wasn’t sorry, I know I’m bad at grammar.
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    Darien looked down on her (how long can she be passed out for.) Darien didn’t know it but his hands were intwined with hers and he was rubbing his thumbs over hers in a careless way. Darien was worried. She had been asleep for 40 minutes and Darien had forget that John was there, well that wasn’t until he said “hmm…Darien sorry but I got to get, to work.”

    Darien jump a little, John see it, but said nothing “Oh!” Darien’s eyes were foggy for a minute. “Right, well I will talk to you later, bye John,” with that said John walked to the door and left.

    Darien was lost a little bit after John left, so that he didn’t feel the arms go around his neck. Darien looked back to Serena, he wasn’t prepared for what was coming. All he felt was another pair of lips on his. Darien got lost in the feeling of it. Darien was no stranger to kissing but he never feel one so instinctual be so deep in feeling, something he never felt before with any of the girls he kissed and all he was doing was pushing his lips back to her lips. He opened his mouth and ran his tongue across her bottom lip. She opens her mouth and his tongue went to hers. They played with each other’s tongues in each others mouths, felt every teeth in her mouth from top to bottom. Plus she tasted like sweet chocolate and man did it shoot, shocks up his back. Darien, heard a moan and that stopped him, he remembered where he was and who it was that he was kissing. Darien looked down, he was no longer kneeing on the floor over the couch. He was on the ground and Serena was under him. Her arms were around his neck and her hand, were in his hair. But her hands were so in his hair that, even her fingers were twisted around his hair. His left arm was under her and up her shirts, cross her back, back to the front. His hand was grazing her right breast and the right hand was on her waist, slightly down her skirt, his thumb was grazing her panties. But the worst thing about it was that her legs were wrapped around his waist in a very intimate way. How long have they been at it? Why the hell did she kiss him? Why did he kiss her back and how the hell did they get like this. But the thing that scared him the most was that his liked it and wanted to do it again. He felt like his done this before, many of times. He was mad that, he was lost on how they got there and that he had a massive hard on because of her and her body. If he hadn’t woken up from that moan, they would have gone all the way since she was trying to stop him and that would be bad, he could see the papers now, 19th old takes 14th old girl’s innocence, her father kills him and she says he forced her in to it. “What are you doing?” a voice whispered. She was still out of it, a little bit. “And why are you on top of me?” she says a little bit louder and in a weird voice. He looked at her (what’s wrong with her, she kissed me.)

    “Don’t you remember Serena?”

    “All I remember is falling and hum…” her face got so red. (She does remember!) “I’m sorry I hit you there!” she looked down to his thing but couldn’t see since he was still on top of her. “Umm… how long have we been like this and why are we like this in the first place?”

    “I don’t know umm…” He looked at the clock, and his eyes widen a little. Serena nosiest, but didn’t say any thing. “I think an hour and a half.” (An hour and a half, why were they like that and why didn’t she remember what they were doing, so help her god if he touched anything?) Her mouth was opening when to ask but he said something first. “You kiss me Serena and umm… well I don’t know we just ended up on the floor!” she stared at him. When her face went completely red and she looked away from him.

    “We Kissed?” screamed a very lost looking Serena.

    “Well umm… you kissed me,” Darien said in a dominant voice, “and it was more then just a kiss, there was more in there then that and you know it,” Darien said this in a very low tone and didn’t look at Serena, well not in the eyes at least. (She’s going to kill me! She’s going to kill me!)

    Serena’s eye stared to glow “one I don’t remember kissing you, two I wouldn’t kiss you if you were the last man on this earth, three I don’t even know how to kiss someone because I've never done it, don’t lie to me you, you…!” She looked at him like he was a big bug that she was about to squash. “And why would I want you to kiss me in the first place you, you Jerk!” After she said this she remember telling him she had never kissed, and with that much told about herself, her face turned so red.

    Darien just looked at her, she was still under him and acting like she didn’t remember that kiss, like kissing him was hell on earth, and they didn’t way more then just kiss and she was so into it, like she did it so many times and she want to do more with he but now she acted like it never had. I mean they were making out like there was no tomorrow. For heaven sakes she was still under him sacking from the feeling he invoked in her, plus she wasn’t even asking to get up or for him to get off of her. Darien was pissed, with the little girl under him, that made him want to show her up, on the feeling she felt for him, he could just bury himself in her over and over, making her scream from the feeling he invoked in her. (She’s the one who kiss me and not the other way around, and now she is acting all innocent. That tease, he was going to kill her for doing this to him, for heaven sakes, didn’t she feel how hard she made him. No one is that innocent.) “As I said Serena you kissed me not the other way around!” he said this in such a voice it scared her.

    “I would not kiss you, you Jerk, now get off of me right this second!” Serena was so red in the face, even redder then before, it was so bad that it looked like she dyed her hair. (That jerk, who does he think he is? Why would I kiss him? Umm is it me or is he closer to me!) Darien was one inch from her face, one inch! She couldn’t breath. (What is he doing, I told him to get off of me that jerk?) Darien was a centimeter from her lips, she can’t say a word, and her mouth wouldn’t work for her. When they herd the sound of deg dong from the door bell. They jump apart so fast but Serena legs were still rapped around his waist, so they fell right back and hit each others forehead.

    “Serena unwrap your legs from around my waist,” he looked at her, she was lost. “Serena,” he called to her. She looked at him, “so I can answer the door!” Darien told her in a very loud but in a room voice, so the person at the door didn’t hear him. Serena looked down, then back up, and then down again. Her legs were wrapped around his waist.

    (How did that happen and when, but more imported why are my legs so tightly around his waist and why didn’t I know about it, it feel so natural.) Serena looked at Darien and then unwrapped her legs from around his waist.

    Darien stood up and walked to the door. (Why do I feel like I lost more then heat, more like it was my life?) He looked back to look for Serena, she was hiding in the other room but peeking around the side to see who it was. Darien turn back to his door, he opened it and Andrew came walking in. “So where’s the girl Dar?”

    Darien looked at him, then to where Serena was hiding. “What do you mean Drew?” Darien said a little bit weird.

    Andrew rose his eye brow at Darien. “Well you took so long to get the door, you think you were fucking some girl in here! Plus I heard the loud sounds. “Darien’s face dropped, and then turned red.

    “No, I was…”

    “That’s great Dar, you know I was kidding!” His eye balls were every where but on Darien, he was searching the room. “So, is some one here with you Dar?” Andrew ask Darien with a glean in his eye.

    “Hmm…yes, my person from the program is here. (Now leave, Draw, leave!)

    “Oh! Well Amy told me that you got Serena.” Andrew busted out laughing. “Isn’t that funny Dar, how did you make her believe that one Darien?” Darien wasn’t laughing. Man, he didn’t even move a muscle. “Hay Dar you all right,” this made Andrew think, “did you really get Serena?” All Darien could do was shake his head, yes. “Is she here right now?” Again all he got was a head shake. “Where is she?” Darien pointed to the other room. Then Andrew started walking in the other room, and Darien following right behind. There was no one in the room. “Where is she Darien?”

    “I don’t, she was in here a minute ago, well that’s before you comment.” Darien turned to Andrew. Andrew face dropped! Andrew was going to say something, when Darien put his hand over Andrew’s mouth. “I heard something!”

    “What did you do this time?” Darien and Andrew walk to the voice they hear. You could tell that it was Serena, a mad Serena but she sounded different. Darien and Andrew walked in to the room, but Serena didn’t see them, she had her back turned to them. Darien looked at Serena, she was on a cell phone, but who was she talking to. “What do you mean you did it?” (Do what and who is Serena talking to? What is Andrew thinking about, why didn’t I answer the door, faster?) “You did it, now face up to it?” (Man who ever if was, she sure was chewing the person out.) “Help, you want my help?” (Help, someone asking Serena, the klutz for help. Man what could she do?) “I don’t know, just give it time.” Serena stuck out lips and blew her hair out of her face. “You want to see me?” (Who could want to see, Serena, and why do I care its probably one of her girl friends.) “I can’t do it till later, I got that thing to do. Right I understand, ok, ok I’ll meet you at the one place at 6:30pm. I won't be late, don’t worry Sammy, I’ll protect you.” (One, why am I a thing, two, who the hell is Sammy, and three, why would she care about him, for that matter, why do I?)

    Andrew was want to know just as much as Darien did but looked mad, and man was that scary. Andrew looked that Darien, his face didn’t move but his eyes did. They show one emotion, one second then another the next. (Is it me or is that jealousy, I saw in Darien’s eyes over Serena? Man, Darien never cared what a female did. And, let me tell you many have tried to make him jealous. And here is the one to do it and she didn’t even try, plus it’s Serena. Hmm so, what was Darien and Serena doing here before I got here and why did it take so long to answer the door?) Andrew looked that Darien again (I’ll kill him, if he touched or hurts Serena, even if his is my best friend, she is like my sister.)

    Darien had it up to here of this thing, he was going to stop it before he did some thing that he regretted later. Darien clear his throat, which started Andrew and scared Serena, she jumped and scream. Then she turned around and looked that Darien, he looked a little weird, maybe she was holding him up. “Hum, Oh! Yes I’m all right, I just got scared.” Serena got red in the face.” Don’t laugh at me Sammy, you, you.” Serena looked up at Darien, and he looked piss off. His eyes flicked with madness or something she never seen in his before. She was stunned at first, but then remembers Sammy. “Umm, Sammy I got to go, I’ll see you tonight,” Serena said real fast. (Is it me or did he get madder before I hung up?) “So, hmm what are we doing today Darien? Oh! Hey Andrew!”

    “Hay Serena, so are really Darien’s partner in the program?”

    “Yes, how did you know?”

    “Amy told me but I thought she was kidding or something. So what do you guys has to do to get the credit?”

    “We have to each spend every other week in each others life, till the end of it. We have to know all these questions and be able to write a 20 page paper on each other and know the others schedule. Plus make out a food diagram for a person for a week on what they eat and then there are guide lines for that too. And that’s only half of it.

    “Wow, Serena you got to do all that.” He them turn to Darien, “you too Darien?”

    “No, I just got to live one week in my life and the next in hers, till it ends. I’m suppose to teach her how to be a grown up and live her life right and put her on the right track in life. Then write a report about how it went.” (Wow, Serena got a lot of work to do and what’s with the food thing?) “Why do you have so much Serena?”

    “Oh! Miss H did it by the person and to pass I got to do all of that and more, which reminds me, I got to ask you a lot of questions some time.” They both looked at Serena but couldn’t tell what she was thinking. “So what are we going to do guys? I hope it’s something fun or I’ll be so gone tomorrow from too much work.”

    “Oh! Serena don’t worry, Darien goes to the Arcade every Saturday for a couple of hours.” Serena looked for Darien, who was gone. Andrew seen that and turned toward a door. “He went in there.” He point over Serena to the door, then Serena started walking over there he said “but I wouldn’t go in there!” He said it very fast and in a tone worrying! Serena turned around to him and opened her mouth but he spoke first. “That’s his bed room, he when in there to change his closes.” Serena mouthed, Oh! “Well we better get our stuff, he probably didn’t say any thing because he not used to other people in his space, and a female at that.” Andrew walked over to his stuff. Serena picked up her foot to move a far from the door and to get her stuff, when she felt something hard against her back, and started falling. Serena opened her eyes after a couple of seconds. (Why am I not on the floor and what’s that warm on my back and stomach.) Serena looked down that her waist. There was a part of large hand rapped around it, she look up the arm to see the owner of the hand. Darien stared back at her. Serena pulled away, she did it so fast, that she fell and the floor. Andrew looked at her and Darien (did I miss something.)

    “Well I think we’re being off! Serena said a little bit too loud. Then she started walk toured the door. The guys looked at her, then at each other, they shrugged and followed her.
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    Now the three were in the Arcade. Andrew was working, Darien was sitting there talking to him and drinking his coffee. Three seats down -- the farthest she could get away by staying his daily life for the program, was Serena, drinking a chocolate malt. For once Serena was being quieter than a bug. Which Andrew and Darien had nosiest. “So Darien what did happen in your apartment before I got there?” Andrew looked that Darien he mumbled some thing, something that sound like, “a lapse in sanity.” “What did you say Darien?” This got Andrew, what could they have done for Darien to say something like that, what did he do to Serena, she was being so quiet, which he had never seen her do.

    “We didn’t do anything, she came over, fell, had to get John to help me carry her to the couch,” Darien said very dry. (Yes, nothing happen, it must of when my mind playing tricks on me. Serena just fell on me and my mind was racing that’s all. I mean she was out for an hour before coming back.) “You know Meatball Head being Meatball Head!”

    “Why do I feel like your not telling me something Darien and why was John there?” (Why was John there and what happened to Serena that she needed to be put on the couch.)

    “Oh! Well Serena fell and kind of knocked her self out and John had seen it and helped me, that’s all.” (Why do I feel like he’s not telling me something?) Darien looked at Andrew, he looked like he was buying it. (Why is he looking at me like that and he hasn’t answer my other question.) Darien looked that him again and remembers he didn’t answer the one of his questions. “John lives right cross the hall from me.”

    “Oh! I didn’t know that, so what do you plan to do today!” Andrew said which make Darien turn around to look at Serena. (What should we do today?)

    “Hey Meatball Head do you have anything to do this weekend?” (Did Darien just ask Serena out or what?) Andrew shakes his head. But Serena didn’t even move. No, she was just sitting there, looking out into space. “Hay Meatball Head are you listening to me?”
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    Serena’s Day Dream

    There Serena was sitting on a bench eating ice cream, talking to Tuxedo Mask and they were laughing. Then a monster came out of no where and start attacking Serena and Tuxedo Mask. Tuxedo Mask saved her and killed the monster. “Serena are you all right, my love?”

    “Yes, Tuxedo Mask, you saved me!”

    “Of course Serena, love why wouldn’t I?”

    “I don’t know, because…” Serena didn’t get to finish because Tuxedo Mask kissed her. She melted into him. He pulled back.

    “Serena, my love will you mar…”
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    “Serena, Serena, Serena!” Darien said it over and over, and shuck her.

    “Hum?” Serena turned around to see Darien, right behind her. “What!” She was mad that him, he made her miss Tuxedo Mask asking her something, and it sounded good too.

    “I said, what do you how to do this weekend and don’t say day dream, you all ready did that.”

    Serena looked at him, he was totally smirking like a dame cat. “Well, if you must know I got a paper do on Ancient Rome and Greece and how their different and how they are in the world today and how them help make it.”

    “Great!” Darien said really happy looking.

    “Great!” Serena said in confusion. then Darien did same thing weird, he pay for Serena and him food by putting money on the table, then grabbed Serena's hand and pulled her to her feet, and then pulled her out her door. “Bye Andrew!” Darien said over his shoulder.

    “Bye Darien, bye Serena!” Andrew looked that the site before him, of the blonde being pulled out the door by the man who love to make her life hell.

    “Did I miss something?”
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    “Where are we going Darien?” Serena asks as Darien pulled her down the street from the Arcade.

    “Get in!” Darien said as he opened the car door for her. Serena got into the car but still didn’t know where they were going. They had been driving for about 20 minutes, and then they stopped. Serena and Darien got out of the car in front of a big building. (Where are we, and why did Darien bring me here?)

    (Hmm…this will be fun!) Darien made should his doors were locked, then took Serena's hand and lead her up the steps. Serena keep looking around and stopping. Darien got so sick of her stopping that he, put his arm around Serena shoulder, with his hand still on hers but which to her other hand on the other side of her, to make her walk. (This feels so, so hmm… right!)
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  • From Suzett on July 04, 2005
    I love this one.I have only one thing to say to you... Keep Them Comming.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2005
    Great chapter. You've got a steady feel for the characters and they seem to be heading in a solid direction. A few confusing bits here and there with mispelling, but really, who doesn't have their own herd of spelling gremlins? Keep up the good work. I look forward to the up-coming chapters.
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  • From ANON - Aroura on June 30, 2005
    It has been a long time sents I wanting to read a SandD story like this. The one that I do read I get loss with in the secound chapter but you have hooked me and have pulled me in to you story THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 30, 2005
    Definitely should have run it through your editor first. But you have gotten me curious - just what did Sammy do that he had to all his sister for help on? Hope to see the answer soon! Laters!
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  • From ANON - GirlWithRedBalloonInCorner on June 29, 2005
    I really like this story. It's going in a good direction but could use just a tad bit of editing. Lovely character building up. Try making the transitions just a little easie. Good luck. Great Story.
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  • From ANON - yue on June 29, 2005
    lol. what a way to start a project. this truelly is the project from hell. update!!
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