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Reviews for An Imaginary Toy

By : ErieDragon
  • From lindajrjt on January 30, 2008
    Yea I love Akito as a male too and totally disregard what has happened in the manga. This was a good oneshot!
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  • From Revolutionist on June 11, 2007
    I am awe struck. The poetry in your words and the cryptic under tones of the dialouge made this fic a very enjoyable read. Tohru was a bit out of character, but you did a fine job of explaining how she was able to change into such a different person. And your words, "Tohru is beyone Tohru"

    I also found it interesting how you potrayed Hatori. Though most Fanfic authors nobilize him, you managed to keep him perfectly into character: weak and cowardice. Wanting change but never moving a finger.

    The last line should almost be put into parenthesis. I was satisfied with your conclusion just before the last astrick line, but the mention of their child is important as well. Still, I can't help but feel as if I'm hanging on that last bit. What is the girl's name? What will become of her?

    Overall, this is a very well written piece and of a professional caliber. Thank you for a good read.
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  • From ANON - Patty on December 17, 2006
    Very good! Is it a one shot or will there be more?
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  • From ANON - ree on October 30, 2006
    this has got to be one of my favorite akito/torhu stories! anyways, hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Plaza on October 09, 2006
    Wow! This is such an artful fic! I adore this! This is my first time reading an Akito X Tohru fic and I must say, I am more than impressed. Really, I adore this!
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  • From ANON - AnimeMan on January 12, 2006
    nice! if there is another chap update soon
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  • From ANON - Mewling on December 23, 2005
    Woah. Woah. That was so amazingly written. In character, too. Facinating, with a heavy morbidity. The ending line was wonderfully creepy.
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  • From ANON - Meena Vangel on November 05, 2005
    hey... that waz so intersting... pleaz continue... :)
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  • From on October 29, 2005
    This story was very fascinating yet dark in a way. There's no other way I could put it. I kept readng it over and over, and I still get that weird sensation... like sadness I guess. I don't know why, lol. I totally understood your story. I'm guessing that if Akito gets bored with Tohru, he will leave her... but in the end after Tohru had her child, they're still at it. Lol. I love Akito&Tohru... this coupling is always so angst-y. I hope you will write more of this pairing. Good job btw!
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  • From ANON - Thanks. on September 05, 2005
    T-T This was AWESOME! I loved it. Kind of like the stuff I write, but never post. Thanks for this, and im not going to ask for you to continue. its beautiful the way it is!
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  • From ANON - Confused on September 01, 2005
    I don't get it. What was that ending all about? What happened? I don't like guessing, I need stories to be straight forward. What exactly were their feelings toward eachother and the about pregnancy?
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  • From ANON - Sasha on August 24, 2005
    Loved it! ^_^
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  • From on July 18, 2005
    Wow, this was amazing. It's really difficult to find decent Akito x Tohru fanfics, but you definitely surpassed my expectations and made a wonderful one! *adds to recommended reading* This is an Akiru fic that cannot be missed, for sure. It has such a... an original take to it. It's very good. Akito is kept menacingly in character and Tohru is on the edge of falling out of character, while still being the onigiri we all love. I can't forget the way you wrote the sexual scenes, describing them so wonderfully without writing anything actually pornographic... well done! ^_^
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  • From halloweenflower on July 02, 2005
    oh my. who is the little girl?

    i love these 'cant tell reality from fiction' stories.

    so confusing yet so lovely.
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  • From ANON - Mallie3 on June 19, 2005
    I love how you wrote this fic! It is awesome please keep writing I am going to wait for the next chapter and hope it will come very soon! I love it the characters and how you put them I love it...and its just like Akito! I hope you update soon! Please keep it up!!!!
    :)
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