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By : Rhonda
  • From ANON - XaloneXalwaysX on June 03, 2005
    OMG WTF......Did he kill Ginji?!?!?! I'm...kind of lost. O_O Holy shit...
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  • From ANON - Lychee on May 24, 2005
    oh dear god, please write a sequel. I reeealllly want to see how Ban explains this to Ginji. hee hee
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  • From ANON - MorteGami on May 14, 2005
    Oh. My. God......

    ;;lets out a snicker;;

    ;;dies of laughter;;

    That was SOOO GOOD!! Wow, hun, just..wow. I will admit to being VERY curious about how Ban is going to explain THAT to Ginji. It brings such delicious thoughts to mind! If not a part two, then I would definitely go for a sequel. It's definitely good enough for it.

    Mmmm...I'm definitely a happy lady now. ;;nods;; Yus, very happy. THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - MoOdSWInG on May 13, 2005
    Holy shit!!! Now that was one hell of a quicky. WOW~ I'm litteraly out of words. This fic was good!
    Congrats on your first fic. You are one good author. I'm happy to know you started writting with
    a Ban/Gin fic cuz hell knows there is so few of them. (and that even though the serie is oh-so-slashable)
    I hope you continue with this I would really like to know how it resolves (kekeke, lets see how Ban
    explains to Ginji the details of this "situation") One thing though, if you ever plan on pursuing writting
    boys smut; Spit fucks hurts!!! Really. Maybe try to incorporate a little lube somewhere. I know they didn't
    actually do it and that it was a dream so i'm guessing people don't usually dream of lubbing themselves ^_~
    so no harm here yet but just in case. I'm saying this cuz I cringe everytime I read a fic where the boys fuck on
    spit only or worst, with no prep or lube at all and also in hope to read more of that sweet Ban/Gin story and
    for you to make it trully amazing. Hope my little critic didnt get you down, I meant no harm, really just
    suggesting something for it to become a perfect fic. Tehee ^_^ Please, please keep up the good work
    (err...I know im cheezy!) I love your writting style, you have a way with words that so few have dont let it go to waste.

    I really hope to read from you again soon (but hey no rush, ur the artist I know those things takes time)


    the most-likely-to-become-one-of-your-loyal-fan,

    -MoOdSwInG

    P.S. Sorry for the bad grammar and spelling, its late and english is my second language.

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  • From ANON - Crimson on May 12, 2005
    That was your FIRST stab at a fanfic? The language, the descriptions, the holy shit HOT SEX! How do you do that on a first try?! Good job!
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