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Reviews for On the Street of Dreams

By : Chocho
  • From ANON - darlene on July 17, 2008
    Omg. I absolutly love this fic. I just read the whole thing today. Its amazing. Is there any chance for a sequel.
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  • From bbarber07 on May 01, 2008
    This story is great. However I only have one issue with it. It may be nitpicking, but the national age of consent is 13. Now each prefecture also has a different age of consent, which ranges from 13 to 17, but another quirk of Japanese law is that the law defines “true” sexual conduct as that between men and women, and not to be confused with “imitation” between those of the same sex (rather homophobic of them I'd like to add), as part of the "Prostitution Protection Act". Therefore Shuichi and Eiri's relationship would hypothetically be legal. This is fanfiction, so it's not a big deal, but I thought you would like to know!
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  • From ANON - Aelan on July 12, 2006
    Oh wow. Just wow. I am so intrigued.
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  • From ANON - hirolover7 on July 12, 2006
    I absolutely love this story. *smiles*
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  • From ANON - dee on January 05, 2006
    i also think there were quite a few loose ends also...like i wanted to know how hiro and suguru reacted to finding out what shu was and also something more with eiris family...maybe a reaction from his family when they found out whoeiri was seeing...also i wanted to know what shus parents thought of the situation also
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  • From ANON - calbee on December 29, 2005
    Points for a happy ending, but there were some loose ends that you could've tied up better...such as Shuichi's parents' reactions to the birth of the baby (and what they'd do afterwards) as well as Ryuichi's response. I guess I was expecting more drama from the family and to see that nothing was really resolved was disappointing. Overall, good fic though. Thanks for the good read.
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  • From ANON - C4ndyp4nts on December 23, 2005
    Hey, I just wanted to say good job on finishing this story, it was one of the best Gravitation fanfictions I've ever read, even if the timeline of them falling in love was really short. I love your portrayal of the characters, and I check out your other stories as well. I really like the obsessive neighbor one, it was the first one I read from you. You should keep writing Gravitation fanfictions, because you're one of the few sources I can count on for excellent Gravitation fanfictions :)
    Keep writing awesome stories!
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  • From ANON - xunxin on December 22, 2005
    wow.
    *wipes away a tear*
    that was so cute and.......CUTE!
    I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT.
    this is one of those rare stories that i can go back and reread a million times, never getting sick of it.
    awesome job on your part!
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
    WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE OVER?
    SEQUEL?
    REALLY?
    YEAH! HAPPY DAYS!!
    I actually didnt notice the old title until you said so.
    anyway, hurry up with the next story!!
    love ya sis!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2005
    Love the two chapters and can not wait for the next one. I guess it's the wedding uh. keep up the good work, this story have been the best one i have ever read. Hope u make more storys like these. Merry christmas to u and a happy new year.
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  • From ANON - dee on December 22, 2005
    I think im going to cry...this was my favorite fic and its over grrr...sooo sad now i have nothing else to read...would it be too much to ask to do a sequel
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  • From ANON - ryuichi13 on December 22, 2005
    Wahh!! It's so sweet, I can't believe it's completed. I loved it; every emotion, every twist and turn. And now... Will there be a sequel?
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  • From ANON - the soul on December 22, 2005
    Wow, that was a great chapter thank-you for posting....
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  • From ANON - kagomegirl on December 22, 2005
    awwwww kawaii!! this was one of the best fics i have read in a while of gravi. soo sweet!! ha i bet eiri IS related to eric lol. wouldnt that just be funny. ooh i do hope shu has at least one more child. *grin* eiri's baby would be soo kawaii!!! great job!!
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  • From on December 22, 2005
    SEQUEL TIME, FOR BOTH STORIES!!! YOUR STORIES ARE THE BEST, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on December 12, 2005
    yay! more more more more


    lovely chapter...loved the way it ended, lol!
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