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Reviews for HOTTER DAY

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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2005
    that sucked. It wasn't even a fucking story.
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  • From ANON - Bitchpants on June 27, 2005
    Woah... That wasn't even a story, just random sentences placed together to form some sort of Frankenstein-like paragraph. By the way real lesbians (take note on how I spelled that) don't just jump in bed together because they're both women, that's stupid.
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  • From Mikai on June 27, 2005
    Um...yeah. Next time you write a fanfic, try to elaborate on the events instead of writing them down so bluntly. Keep writing, you'll improve!
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  • From ANON - Mrs. Peanut on June 25, 2005
    Fekker: *write*

    Mrs. Peanut: well that was embarrassing.

    Fekker: Shut it, bitch.




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  • From ANON - Fekker on June 25, 2005
    Mrs. Peanut: Can you believe how crappy this was?

    Mr. Fekker: No my good buddy I cannot. Feels like I was reading a passage from hooked on phonix.

    Mrs. Peanut: Awww it wasn't that bad...

    Mr. Fekker: are you (bleeping) kidding me!? After reading this, I had to go so bad!

    Mrs. peanut: yeh your right....

    Mr. Fekker:I can right a better story out of the sperm from my penis, spell better too...

    Mrs. Peanut: heh heh, he spelled lesbian wrong. Heh heh heh...

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  • From ANON - Crazy Ivan on June 18, 2005
    Short, sweet, and to the point. A half way decent fic for the half way decent pervert. Great job, sorta.....


    LONG LIVE THE SOVIET UNION!!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - Crazy Wolf on June 10, 2005
    At least I was nice about telling you this story is crap.
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  • From ANON - P.C. on June 06, 2005
    Mein Komph! Can this GET anymore mechanical! I feel like I'm reading some kind of see-spot-run book!!! It's such a pointless plot, and it seems like you just typed the first thing that came to your head!

    By the way, what the hell is up with the summary!? 'What happens when Renae and Korina are horny?' What a stupid question! Think before you write!
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  • From ANON - DJL on June 02, 2005
    This is crapper than your last fic! And that has one line in it!!!

    by the way, learn to Spell dumbass
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  • From ANON - Crazy Wolf on May 15, 2005
    Crazy Fox: Isn't this just a little bit to freaky I mean you'd never catch anybody admitting to being a lesbian.

    Crazy Wolf: She's right. Not even a cartoon would admit to that so quickly and easily.

    Crazy Fox: But still a good story. You could make it a bit longer.

    Crazy Wolf: Yah what she said.
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