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Reviews for Brothel Boogaloo

By : FullMetalBlunt
  • From maderine on September 29, 2006
    I realise that this story was meant to be an AU, but even so, it was pretty seriously out of character all around. I just can't, even under these circumstances, picture Jin as the weepy uke. Sorry. And I have to say that Mugen's rather extreme actions don't make a lot of sense.

    On a technical note, this story is fairly well written, but could do with some checking over for grammar.
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  • From ANON - Misty on August 25, 2005
    Wow, that was one of the best and well developed fanfics i've read in a long time. It was terrific, definitely not a waste of time!
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  • From ANON - natsume54 on August 22, 2005
    another great and very hot fic!!! XD you never disapoint me!!! keep up the awesome work!!!! btw loved the last line
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2005
    Kept wanting to hate Gashi since I was hoping for another hot tear jerker of a Mugen atonement scene...but now even i will probably have fantasies about him now XDDD So sweet! But why do i keep picturing Vash the Ssampede in my mind O_o ?
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  • From ANON - Schwarzwald (not signed in) on July 01, 2005
    This was a lovely story that I kept coming back to see if it was finished. It had all the right elements and i want to thank you for doing one of the first few Samurai Champloo fics.
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  • From FullMetalBlunt on June 30, 2005
    I have to say, this was the hardest fiction I have ever wrote...
    After the first chapter I was really lost; thinking, 'what did I just do?'. I had no idea where to go with it, or how to fix it. I agree the end was rushed *wrist screams in pain* and I am also not happy with the final Mugen/Jin meeting. I stopped and started this one so many times, it lost it's flow and tumbled clumsily.
    Who knows? Maybe one day I will be able to change a few things, and make it better as a whole...
    Until then, I'm just happy it's done. ^_^U
    Thank you to all who have read it, despite it's jumbled nature.
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  • From ANON - sweetsatincocoa(watching FLCL, cant sign in) on June 29, 2005
    Wow...I'm glad you added chapters because I was sure this was gonna be a one-shot! Awww..Jin is so happy w/Gashi! Mugen...you dirty bastard! *kicks Mugen in the balls with steel toe boots*

    Mugen saying he was gonna fuck them up...Priceless!!!


    *****out of *****^-^
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  • From ANON - vanessa on June 29, 2005
    I have to admit that I didn't like the last chapter of this fic. Despite the length, to me
    it just felt like you rushed it. I thought the beginning of this chapter was strong and
    then it sort of went downhill with the story-line, and with the way you chose to write it.
    One of the parts i disliked most was the meeting between Mugen and Jin. Personally
    I would have enjoyed it if Mugen was more cruel by sort of rubbing what happened in
    Jin's face. Maybe anything would have worked better than with the way it was ended. lol
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  • From kittyblue on June 27, 2005
    Really cruel! Poor Jin!!!!
    Now to compensate.. Jin's Revenge... :p
    Hope to read more chapters!!
    ^^

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  • From ANON - jackyboy on June 26, 2005
    OH MY GOSH!!!! This is one sexy piece of work. For some odd reason, I got turned on by the whole spanking bit......it was.....beautiful........But yes! REVENGE! Definantely.........Mugen spanking Jin.......mmmmmm...........
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  • From ANON - Syn on June 23, 2005
    I love this story even though I love Jin more than Mugen. Write the other chapter. It seems like it'd be very interesting.
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  • From ANON - vanessa on June 18, 2005
    this is one cruel story alright....but i effing loved it. you really should update
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2005
    I THINK IT WAS VERY VERY WRONG
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2005
    itwassoped
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  • From ANON - Aya on June 11, 2005
    This is awesome, very realistic too
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