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Reviews for Broken Heart

By : Sukara
  • From quamp on January 04, 2006
    Well... aside from the misspellings and the factual errors, it was... well... uninspiring. Can't you be bothered to use the spellchecker? Can't you get someone to beta read for you? (I will if nobody else will.)
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  • From ANON - Jinxyspellkeeper on November 22, 2005
    hope to see more. i liked it. please update eventualy?
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  • From ANON - Paradiseboy on November 18, 2005
    Why do you always write unfaithful stories?Weird.
    And fix your goddamn grammAr!Use your education!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2005
    update!
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  • From ANON - JWM on June 07, 2005
    Interesting, although a bit angsty.
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  • From ANON - Baka Pink on June 06, 2005
    If you want people to stop telling you your grammar (sic) needs work, you need to, well, work on it. I noticed you asked for a beta before, and I saw at least one person offer to beta for you in the reviews of your first story--it might have been more than one, even. Did that deal fall through?

    Not everyone is good at grammar and spelling, and it doesn't mean you're not smart or a bad writer if you're not, but mistakes do throw a reader out of a fic and make it a lot harder to understand. It's an important part of writing something enjoyable.

    If you need a beta, check out Ayla's message at the top of the page--there's a Yahoo group set up specifically for that purpose, and I'm sure someone there would be happy to help you out. If spell check and grammar check just aren't doing it for you, try that.

    Just yelling at anyone who dares mention it isn't going to help the problem any, because they're not wrong for pointing it out, and many of them have done so politely.
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  • From on June 05, 2005
    OOOO nice work man
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  • From ANON - KC6 on June 05, 2005
    Vol 5 huh, why don't you do like me, i live in Brazil were the manga isnt being published, so i dowload then in the net, if you wanna i can give my fonts.
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  • From ANON - KC6 on June 05, 2005
    Wow, thanks its the first time that someone answer my request. The fic was very good, the part of the drama was just like i wished it would be. About other requests, just answer me in what chapter of the manga you are, so i can make requests in base of some chapters that you already read, in my case im at the chapter 82(vol 10). Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - havenoname on June 04, 2005
    It was okay. Still you should fix up your grammer and spelling.
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