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Reviews for Sacred Lineage

By : Britomartis
  • From KageYukimura on December 06, 2008
    I love this story. I can't wait for you to update. I keep coming back and checking in but sadly it hasn't been up dated for awhile. I like how your charactors are so origianl yet stick with the same kind of pattern that the real Hellsing has. I hope that you up date again soon.
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  • From on January 05, 2006
    i love this story! your OCs are real and very inventive. and the story so far has been intreiguing without seeming bogged down in details. i hope you continue it soon.
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  • From ANON - Steven on October 20, 2005
    nice story
    Update Soon
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  • From ANON - Tunod on July 22, 2005
    Just read through the fic, right up to A Plan Gone Awry; I have to admit, it's a pretty good fic on the whole. There are a few occasional bouts of out-of-characterishness; Not to mention the fact that you seem to have set Pip/Seras aside; given that it's a wholly canon pairing, it might be a good idea to put a little bit of the captain of the Wild Geese lovin' on Seras in there. But yeah, it's a pretty good fanfic, for the most part.
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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on July 20, 2005
    Hmmm... good, i like that u r consistent with making Dierdre smart in every way even when men come along... most OC's tend to be kind of weak in this department but this is a good change.

    She seems to have a bit more balanced personality than Integra which i like a lot. More human... Integra sometimes seems more inhuman than her vampires.

    Yayyyy we r getting close to plot sweetnessss!!!!

    Great work!!!

    +kissu+


    Su J.

    ps: me luvs Marcus
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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on July 18, 2005
    Wow
    Dan does know his military stuff huh?? was it you or him?? i know u were in th emilitary too, let me know.

    Great chappy, i really like the detail and the info and how polished it is. little typos and tense switches but i enjoyed it veyr vyer veyr much!!!

    GREAT JOB DAN!!! SEE I FINALLY DID READ IT BEFORE NOON!! hehe


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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on July 12, 2005
    YAYYY NEW CHAPPY!

    u know i like Marcus a lot... and Dier seems to like him too... go girl, shes so lucky with her little experience...

    can't wait to see what the plan is... integra's plan... will finally ALucard get some luv? c'mon let him get some, he's been a good boy and looks very celibate to me...

    UPDATE SOON!

    kisses and reeses

    Su J.
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  • From ANON - mslcat on July 11, 2005
    so she scored against alucard.
    very impressive.
    please continue.
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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on July 10, 2005
    YOU TEASEEEEEE!!!

    i wonder what will happen... Marcus sounds awesome and i wonder how Dier will see him... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

    i loevd your word choice and description as i told you... i know the part of Dier 'checking the balance of the sword' very well... my ceiling fan has been through hell because of that :D

    +hugs+

    Su J.
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  • From ANON - mslcat on July 06, 2005
    oh, Alucard might be mad.
    He always likes to be the Alpha male in the house.
    interesting.
    Will she perfer Seras' attentions to that of Alucard's?
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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on July 06, 2005
    HOORRAAYYY FOR PWP!!!

    loved it!! well that's a twist i didn't see coming... i love to be surprised! UPDATE SOON OR I WILL ... DO A VERY VERY VERY... FAST CARTWHEEL...

    +morning Cartwhell+

    sorry it was requested...

    :D

    sorry it's too easrly... bai!
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  • From ANON - mslcat on July 04, 2005
    hm, a yank in the house.
    well, guess i'll have to wait and see how he holds his own.
    and what he thinks of Alucard.

    Alucard testing him to see what he's made of might make a nice chapter.
    I'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on July 01, 2005
    hello!

    i liked the fact that Seras came to her instead of Alucard... breaking a common cliche si always good...

    great job! can't wait to see how the 'plan' of that boy against Hellsing will take place.

    +hugs+ bai!
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  • From ANON - SuckUBusj on June 29, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! i was so excited and waited till midnight as you said!!!!!!!!!!! +whines+

    Fine, fine... i'll wait... +sticks tongue out+

    i'm updating tomorrow (Th) like i told you... just so you know...

    i'll be waiting patiently +sighs+

    Su J.
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  • From ANON - mslcat on June 28, 2005
    I liked this story. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
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