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Reviews for Crystal Flaws - Part 04 Crystal Bells

By : LunaHope
  • From ANON - dEEp Serenity on June 20, 2005
    Chap-4 and 5 was great, I like the romance with the brothers building! and Hotaru! and TErrance! LOve it.

    I can see how the two worlds will clash and that saddens me, but you are setting this up for a good story line!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 20, 2005
    Hmm, nice ending, interesting choice of wedding ceremony(I was just wondering if you remembered that Rei practices Shinto or not. Clearly you did your homework on the subject.). I'm guessing we're gonna do a bit of a time jump at the beginning of the next book to, most likely, the birth of the twins? Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 18, 2005
    Her comes the bride, here comes the bride, da, da, da, da, da, da, da, da, da, da! Etc. Well, I suppose that's one way to have a Bachelor Party. Personally, I think the girls had a better, if not safer time at their Bachelorette Party. So, when do the Quartet get to find out that's it actually twins? Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 16, 2005
    Weding bells, HO! Nice develpoment all around, and yes, I'm well aware that women tend to be moody during pregnancy...and periods! (My mother was an extra special example of the latter!) Now, has Hotaru gotten back in time to be fitted for *her* dress? Well, hoping for a wedding next time - laters!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on June 15, 2005
    wow, a lot went on in chap 2. LOL the water works again, I bet for Serenity is was worse cause of the twins! Poor Elios and all the connecting stories with terrance and his families.

    I love how he stands up for Serenity and she's sweet, suprised that she doesn't seem closer to her scouts but then again she has not gone through thick and thin(battles/tradegies) like Serena and her scouts did(facing death over and over and being saved by your princess makes a strong bond!)

    anyway can't wait for the wedding!
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on June 14, 2005
    lol, very good start! Laughing at Serenity for figuring out her parents have sex! it is an eye opener for every young person.

    he is deep and has secrets! Good job and way to keep the interest flowing.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 14, 2005
    A promising beginning. Nice to see Uasgi and Mamoru are still ocasionally "frisky". Update soon. Laters!
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