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Reviews for forming the cycle

By : risu
  • From ANON - CrimsonFallenAngel on October 21, 2005
    Huh. Haru has always been one of my favorites. Momiji too. You may have already answered this, but are you putting anyone else in here? Please don't scream at me... Just asking.
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  • From AnikiaFarago on August 02, 2005
    Is that all there is to the story? Please update!!!!
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  • From whitewlf on August 01, 2005
    oooookay.. pure angst! one of my favs. i like this chapter much more then i did the first. please keep writeing! cant wait for the next chapter!
    -fire okami
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  • From ANON - BakaDen on July 02, 2005
    Aww! Poor Hawwuuu… : (

    Ya know something, I really like this.^^ I find this strange, because not only is one of my favorite characters constantly getting the crap kicked out of him, but he lost his mother, and is going to have to resort to prostitution. I know this, yet I still think this is a very good story. WEIRD! ^_^

    And another thing. That second review. I have to say something about it, because people like that just piss me off. If they can't enjoy a good work, they should leave it and the author the hell alone, like a considerate and reasonable person would do. The fact that they could strike out, complain, and flame the way they do shows the fact they haven't the vaguest conception of they're carelessness, and what an asshole they're being by not taking your feelings into account, or the possibility that you put a lot of hard work into it. That just makes me feel so.. soo... AGH! And speaking of carelessness, to top it all off, they lashed out at the ooc-ness, but didn't even take into account the AU you posted. *sigh* Ridiculous. And agitating to the point of making me sick and nauseous. >.< But anyhow, apparently you seem to have taken care of it, since there has been no reply. Yay! Go you! XD

    Anyway.^^ Please continue. I really like it. I'm wondering... will there be any pairings to come? And will our beloved fiery neko boy make an appearance? *pleads* HxK is my fav. pairing, but the next best thing is interaction between them, and I would love it if they could meet in this AU! I think it would be interesting! Please update soon! -- And apologies for this extremely huge review/...rant ...thing.


    -BDen : )
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  • From ANON - Kristin on June 28, 2005
    I'd like to see how this goes... it has my attention
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  • From ANON - Ailsa Maelone on June 27, 2005
    omg, what the hell. this is AWFUL. it doesn't even make sense. have you ever seen the series/read the manga? if that type of crap was happening Haru would turn black. and you know the whole 'mom hugs him gently' COULDN'T HAPPEN. remember that whole curse thing? it applies to everyone. Haru's mother is not excluded.

    p.s. - your grammar could stand some improving. *subtle hint*
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