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Reviews for Dark Kingdom Transgressions - Part 01 Fallen

By : LunaHope
  • From Scorpinac on June 08, 2007
    To be honest, I was starting to wonder if you'd ever continue this.

    Well, at long last, Beryl and Metallia are in "bed" together. And I think I know what some of the family's fates are doomed to be now. Let the downhill slide continue. Laters!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 18, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From marqqui on December 08, 2005
    Ahhh! She is pregnant! Nasty! It is actually her fault but I dont like her! Next chapter please!
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  • From marqqui on December 08, 2005
    I just hope that this is a Endy/Sere pairing fic and NOT a Beryl? endy fic! That is so gross! Having Endy lip locked to Beryl! You are cruel! Dont you like Serenity?
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on August 21, 2005
    chap 15, wow, talk about love at first site LOL, Serena didn't even speak! and yeah i can see how all of this would weigh VERY heavily on Dairen mind as being his fault...I kinda agree but it just all kind of got out of control. You have a very gripping story here, A lot of emotion but what (I) really like about it is that it's mostly realistic. The way the fathers act, the way the teens act, even all the plotting, with royality it happens has happened in the kind of system the story takes place in.

    And happy naive Serena, knowing nothing of greed, backstabbing and pure evil....ah very good by showing her in this light in this time it makes it believable in how she got the kind of personality she had when she was sailor moon!

    I enjoyed. Happy writing! side note I actually wrote some myself this weekend! Yay
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 21, 2005
    Jumel is SO gonna be her first victim, maybe second after her folks. Next time - When Beryl Met Metallia! And hopefully when P. Serenity met Endymion! Hope the wait isn't too long! Laters!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on August 10, 2005
    chap 14 is excellent!!! ah a look at the soldiers and Queen Serenity

    and dumb humans always so greedy and jealous! Blah
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 10, 2005
    And, yes, hindsight is truly 20-20. A problem my family has become all too familiar with over time for many, many reasons...
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 10, 2005
    And of course now, everything goes kaboomskie! And in regards to "the one that got away", would that be Metallia, Neherenia, or the Ice Queen from the S Movie? My money's going on either A or C, really. And were those Senshi the ones we know and love, or their mothers? Well, look forward to the next one and the long awaited introduction to P. Serenity! Laters!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on August 08, 2005
    chap 13-poor elios it was so sad how the adult peg's didn't understand his or his sister's behavior and therefore didn't really try to make it easier for the children in my opinion. No one knew how to deal with surface raised kids.

    Wow it must have had a really tough 1st year and was wonderful seeing more about his growing up in this chap. Love the look into their society!

    great job
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 08, 2005
    And here would be a relatively good place to insert the Neherenia encounter - she comes storming, possibly slaying a few Pagasi who get in her way, and then, upon actually discovering the GC's location, attempts to seduce Helios into forking it over, or at least joining her side in her "take over the universe" plans. Helios tells her to go screw herself, she attacks him, he defends, then Q. Srenity arrives, and seals her in mirror, and shoots her to Dead Moon which is sent flying away on a roughly thousand or so year orbit(plus or minus a few decades...) But not before Neherenia throws a curse on P. Serenity(Like she did in the Manga?). You're call of course, it'll just be nice to finally get the Moon Kingdom invlolved here! Laters!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on August 05, 2005
    ahhhhhhhh I'd almost forgot about Zo younger brother...almost LOL. That is interesting!

    and Beryl jealous as always, and attention hungry.

    Both bothers were to be kings.....hmmmm

    and poor Darien LOL, trapped into a marriage by convention such a young boy really LOL and you would think he would figure it out with Zo and Beryl....but then again those two are probably such an unlikely hook up in anyones mind!

    Good job, looking forward to the next
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 05, 2005
    Aah, sweet misery! All we need now is a psycho bitch with a sledgehammer and a yen for hobbling men. Okay then, next time the Moon Kingdom's just GOT to come into the picture! I don't think you can hold it off any longer, oh madam procastinator! I look forward to seeing Endymion's true first meeting with Princess Serenity. Laters!
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on August 03, 2005
    chap 11-LMAO, that was funny and good for the queen being nice! and Darien....is so dense! Maybe this is why he's more serious in his next life cause he's stupid and willy nilly in this one. LOL well this is really good and can't wait to read the next tale.

    Poor Zo, he has a lot of baggage
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 03, 2005
    Ooh, now that was a close one! And yet, knowing their imminent fate, I wasn't surprised someone made it in the proverbial nick of time. And of course, the next step now is off to the Moon, and the true beginning of Beryl's madness! And perhaps Beryl finding and joining forces with Metallia! Well, looking forward to it either way. Laters!
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