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Reviews for Innocent Souls

By : UmbraElf
  • From ANON - Ina on November 12, 2006
    I think it is a very good fanfic. My only complaint is how many ideas you stole from Laurell K. Hamilton's Merry Gentry series...>.> Not just ideas but almost complete phrases.
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  • From ANON - k on November 05, 2006
    This is odd to say, but this story is written too...Mary Sue? Seriously, the descriptive nature of the tale is just off and too girlie. Icouldnt read this story, or any attempt at smut because of it.
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  • From ANON - John on November 01, 2006
    This has to be one of the best fanfics I've read on the site so far. You covered the characters very well, and the storyline given the far future nature of both movies, falls in very nicely with the history of Vampire Hunter D. So keep up the good work, and keep writing chapters.

    Oh, and I would be curious if you think there would be a half fey/half vampire child to come out of the pair. If you'd like ideas for that, keep writing and I'll be happy to send you some plausible ones. It's not entirely unreasonable to think that D does have some children out there...
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  • From ANON - Danielle on December 27, 2005
    Holy Crap Great storyline and I love the chemistry you have with your characters please continue
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  • From ANON - phoenix521 on November 30, 2005
    aww...what a sweet chapter. actually, i'm not sure if 'sweet' is the word i'm looking for, but it was a really good chapter, to say the least. and yeah, it was definitely one of the , if not the, longest sex scene i've read. but it was good reading. it was comforting, i suppose is the word, to see that d would be so focused on bronach and be so gentle (for the most part) with her. it was a well written chapter and well worth the wait. i'm anxious to see where the next chapter takes us, so don't be too long in getting it out! (j/k, take your time). well, happy writings and have a good night!
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  • From ANON - Tarren on November 30, 2005
    YYAA!!!!!! I loved it OMG that was onr of the best love/sex scenes I have read! Wow!! Very good and I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Tarren on November 28, 2005
    No fucking way, how can you just stop! I have been wait for D to get some for a very long and just when it's getting to the good part YOU STOP!!!!! You evil evil Bitch! Oh, you better update soon man or I will go off and hurt someone very badly! Pain lots of pain!!
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  • From ANON - phoenix521 on November 10, 2005
    i was amazed to see a new chapter so soon. and oh man, was this one awesome! that bronach, i tell you, she's something else. i really like her. and i'm glad she could fix d. that was some nasty curse, to say the least. can't wait till next chapter, and the promise of lemony goodness makes the wait even longer. well, have a good night!
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  • From ANON - phoenix521 on November 03, 2005
    what a low blow. on ciaran's part, as well as yours. you leave us waiting weeks for a new chapter and then end it w/ such a terrible cliffhanger?! how evil! evilly wonderful! this was a good chapter and the scenes w/ d, especially the fight w/ ciaran, was amazing. and oh man, poor d. what's gonna happen to him? i want to know now.

    well, as i said, good chapter. i hope you get the next chapter up soon! good job, have a good night and can't wait to read more of your stuff!
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  • From ANON - phoenix521 on September 05, 2005
    i really liked this chapter. this story keeps getting better and i appreciate that. fics can often times start slipping, but not this one! very nicely done and hey; d and bronach are startin' to heat up! excellent. it's nice to have a good story and some sex on the side, right? keep up the good work and can't wait 'til the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - b.y. on August 21, 2005
    please give me more!! love the literary style and sexual tension. where's the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - phoenix521 on July 25, 2005
    awesome chapter. a lot of good action. too bad about blackmore, though. i'm excited to see where this will go and how it all will end!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 24, 2005
    Must have more!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2005
    This is an awesome and fitting combo, not to mention extremely well written.
    I can't wait for your updates, it's so nice to see some fresh writtings in a loved section.
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  • From ANON - phoenix521 on July 17, 2005
    wow...this story is turning out great. i've been known to enjoy talks of faerie, etc, and i actually just finished reading a series on the athurian legend that dealt with the faerie and magic and a bunch of random, awesome craziness. so, this is definitely right up my alley at the moment. and if you add in D and a great plot, i'm totally there. and this Bronach...i'm likin' her more and more. this could go far and be really awesome. keep on going and i really am looking forward to the next chapter!
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