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Reviews for Before they were lovers

By : queenofruin
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 23, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 18, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 24, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on July 17, 2005
    I like this tale. Some suggestions, if you'd like to take them into consideration. 1) Motoki is serving customers, not costumers. 2) I don't think a mother would tell a stranger, I'm alone with my daughter. Though Mamoru is nice, still, Ikoku shouldn't have told him about her daughter. Unless of course she was trying to hook them up?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 15, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERENITY on July 11, 2005
    NICE writing! I think your set up(for the stories) is a good one, but can be combined into one story with different names for each chapter

    also, I was expecting some interaction with Serena and Darien...but you cut it off before that could happen. WHile I personally like Serena's mother, I still wanted more Serena and Darien

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