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Reviews for B&D NC OOC!

By : scarychicks

From ANON - gabby on February 09, 2006
oops
i said
your other fic
was the best story
on this website
i was wrong
this fic
is the best story
on this website

you
are
an

exquisite
author
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From ANON - genuinelies on October 26, 2005
Wow. You could have one heck of a bonfire with all the flames in here.

After reading this I came to a conclusion - I'm a lot more f'd up than I thought. Because yeah, I liked it. And wow (I say again!) I'm surprised you seemed to give mine a good review, because it seems like the total opposite end of the spectrum.

The thought of Meryl *really* not wanting it didn't sit very well with me - the concept of honest-to-god rape like this is usually a big turn-off. Forced pleasure, however, if the person is being kind and the person receiving it consciously *realizes* and decides to want it, is another matter. You had it halfway here, with Wolfwood 1) not pleasuring himself and 2) several thoughts were along the lines of trying to make Meryl feel good. I probably would have been 100% satisfied were it to have become consensual at some point, and if there had been some talk of feelings. But that's because I'm a girlie-girl when it comes down to it. And it's fine, 'cause that obviously wasn't what you wanted to do with this.

Your descriptions were very hot, by the way.

The way I see it, fiction is fiction. The series is over. Fanfic is creativity and emotional release - it satisfies urges that the owners and authors of the original series would never cover. Out-of-character characters don't bother me - because honestly, it's horrible arrogance to assume any of us can write them in-character. And hey, you were honest about it.

Flames can be a compliment - it shows you hit a nerve, and hard.
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From on October 25, 2005
One-shot? Darn. I really enjoyed this. I like your writing style. Please, write some more.
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From ANON - PRoyalAngel on August 24, 2005
OmG! Wat is up with some of the people's swearing! Try to say things nicely to other authors. Please! >.< If not, then don't say anything at all. Come on! Cussing is just for people who have nothing better to do, but bad-mouth other people's work or getting in trouble with the cops for hitting an SUV .HEHEHEHEHE................OOPS.................... FREEDOM OF SPEECH!

I like how u described this. Too bad its a one-shot sort of thing. Or is it. -___-

Keep it Up! ^__^
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From ANON - Badger on August 20, 2005
Well, it lived up to it's name alrighty.

Having said that, I must've missed the part of the anime/manga where Meryl was even slightly sexually attracted to Wolfwood (and vise-versa). Plus the part where Wolfwood would be the kind of guy who'd rape a woman with a gun. Plus the part where Meryl would enjoy it and want more.

In short, in the future, if you find it necessary to write this sort've tripe, could you do it with original characters and quit dragging my favorite fandom through the dirt? Or is that too much to ask?

No love at all,

Badger
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From ANON - Ms. ShoeHead on August 06, 2005
As said before the story was very well written. I liked the way you described objects and actions and thought you did a great job with pacing.

But, for your next fic could you please write something less fucked up.
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From ANON - J.K. on August 05, 2005
Preternatural, provocative, & voluptuously piquant.

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From ANON - kime on August 01, 2005
While this is a very well written piece of porn "ish", I can't help wondering if this is really more of a guy's fantasy than a girl's fantasy.

Yes, I am guilty of wanting to be tied up and semi-forced to sexual pleasure BUT I feel like this story is an example of the stereo-typical idea that men think all women want to be dominated like this. This is my PC background tossing up a fuss. I guess I would be happier if Wolfwood didn't say "I don't care what you think I should do". That statement alone flares up the feminazi in me. But since i don't know the characters well, should I just write if off as a character line and not a verbal attack on a woman?

If more background was fed to let the reader know how intensely Meryl felt sexually about Wolfwood, I would be entirely convinced that this a girl's fantasy. The conflicting feelings Meryl felt between giving in to sexual desire/loss of control and survival safety were well done and any reader with a brain would have concluded Meryl's sexual feelings about Wolfwood, but hey, sometimes I want things handed on a plate. Especially if the story is close to crossing the line of making rape sound harmless and a-okay (again, something else that makes it a guy fantasy).

On a baser side, this story made my girly parts tingle and persuade my muscles to do some kegel excercises but not enough to get my all-time favorite beauty pagent contestant, Miss Michigan (the hand for all you non-Michiganders), involved for some crowning victory.

Lastly, I wonder how this story would have turned out if it was done from only one point of view. Do I sound like hypocrite when I say I like one-sided stories because it forces me to question and think about the movtives of the other characters on a deeper level?

Oh, and the last line made me laugh.
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From ANON - grenswench on July 26, 2005
"Instead of the organic contact she had braced herself for, the next sensation she felt was cold steel against her vulnerable opening. The metal sight from the gun was a teasing pressure on her clit, and Meryl�s mind couldn�t process the fact that he was using a weapon on her in this sexual fashion. Her thoughts wouldn�t allow her to think past the feel of the hardness gently pushing against her. He didn�t penetrate her with it, only used it to stimulate her, deliberately drawing out her clit with the angled nub at the end of muzzle."

EEEEEEEEEE this is SO FUCKING HOT!!! the moment i laid eyes the Punisher i knew that it was meant for THIS.

Tease me tease me tease me with that gun but PLEASE FOR GOD'S SAKE GIVE US A SEQUEL!!!!

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!!
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From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2005
Excellent story. Well written (If you are not easily offended) My favorite line had to be, "the priest returned to his position of worship at her feet and tongued her again," Right on Brotha! So what the crap - why the sudden ending! Give us more! Quit being a tease!
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From ANON - the REAL GlassBullet on July 19, 2005
I'm going to take a moment and try to redeem myself here. The review above was not left by me, and I just found it today. I'm assuming my room mate was on my comp again and left the comment.

Anyway, the fic is well written and I enjoyed it. This is probably the only good OOC story I've ever read. Keep up the good work, and don't let the mass of Meryl fans discourage you.
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From ANON - BarnabasFrid on July 16, 2005
As a fellow comrade and fan fiction author, I am THRILLED to be gently lulled into submission by your first attempts at rape! How wonderful, the sense of closeness... the pang of pain and the terrifed painting you have displayed for us: your PUBLIC! What a gem. What a gift to the fanfic world!
As for the fan fiction world... Is it not just that? FICTION. I question the others who have left reviews for this piece. Are you offended by the subject matter or the actions our Author has the characters doing? Rather, if this were simply a rape story without your beloved Trigun characters as the mainstays... would you be so judgemental of another's pure form of creativity?
Mouse? Be Evil... drill holes into these readers walls and steal their cheese! Leave dropping around and about that will forever remind them of the STINK you've made in their minds!
Really! Mazel Tov! It's not like you've written about Hitler sleeping with his half-niece!

B Frid
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From ANON - delivers what it says.. on July 15, 2005
um, well, here's the deal. let's examine this thing. this fic is really amazingly well written, espec for a so-called "twisted" fan fic. there are crazy realistic details (buttons bouncing and the like) and that is probably why people are pissed off at this fic. you are probably scarring them for life re: these characters. i won't criticize you for OOC stuff because you freakin put that in the title, so i knew what i was getting. summary says forced NC stuff, and so yup, i went in knowing that too. so i guess the verdict is, you delivered as promised a NC B&D fic with two OOC characters that is more mature and developed than 99.8% of similar stuff on this site. i guess if people make it through your summary and story codes and still are pissed off, they kind of are asking for it. i asked for it and was glad i did. thanks!
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From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2005
Normally I'd be thrilled to read something that involves Meryl suffering. Hell, I'd be excited to help write it .. but I'm not desperate enough that I would degrade and ruin another character. That is complete disrespect to the creator; not fanfiction in the least. Sadly, there are more of these kinds of OOC fics than ones worth reading.
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From ANON - EmpressGalaxia on July 14, 2005
More people need to write fic like this. Except not involving rape. Or Meryl. Or Wolfwood, for that matter. Or Trigun. And it shouldn't be posted here. And by "write", I mean "internalize and share only with a trained professional with numerous degrees in psychology."
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