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Reviews for Darkness Within

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  • From ANON - Church on October 05, 2006
    Nice update but im kinda confused at some parts but the story=good lemon=average I have reviewd i have reviewed i have reviewd!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Church on October 05, 2006
    Nice update but im kinda confused at some parts but the story=good lemon=average I have reviewd i have reviewed i have reviewd!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Church on February 11, 2006
    Nice story but cant wait for more and OOOOO KEITARO GETS SPECIAL TREATMENT OF PITY!!!! and hell get angry as fuckn hell and shit and more problems arrive and the bloody sailor senshi KICK DER ASS MAN!!!! and hopefully things go good for Keitaro............. in the future but as of now ANGST ANGST ANGST!!!!
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  • From Hudson on February 03, 2006
    sorry wrong fanfic.
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  • From Hudson on February 03, 2006
    Please don't let him go off on Shinobu ok. She's the only to actually HELP him with chorse and stuff and help him feel better when ever he was down. She doesn't deserve for him to go off on her. PLEASE. In fact maybe you can have him acutally thank her for her help....Just a thought. At the very least don't let him go off on Shinobu. please.
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  • From ANON - Dark Oddity on January 03, 2006
    very interesting, the idea is excellent and i like he way you've used "existing" fantasy creatures, aswell as the "not Quite" alliance between enemies although i do hope that the hinata girls are featured a lot more than the sailor moon girls (especially when it involves keitaro's demon needing its sustenence.

    all in all please continue this fic
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  • From ANON - Ian on September 08, 2005
    Ya litterally "don't fuck with me" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Damn thisis good, really why is it that almost every who has these problems tries to bottle them up? Desires ARE emotions, so, same thing, right? They eventually explode out of control, not Keitaro's fault, not fully at least. he's just to fucking innocent to understand that. however in such a situation... his innocence must be shattered.

    Quote: "The innocent 'never' live long enough to save themselves"
    By: I.G. Senkel

    ~Ian
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  • From ANON - DMage96 on August 06, 2005
    yo. great fic lol. i see you read Tithe lol. it a good book. cant wait for the next update. thank you for writing. lol ^_^
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  • From BrianChattillon on August 06, 2005
    An interesting if not slightlly chaotic third chapter. Rather impressive.

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  • From ANON - Kinnara on August 03, 2005
    I LOVE YOU! (As a friend) This story is so kewl! Plz, update!

    "Dance til your legs are covered in blood."-Immortal Rain
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  • From ANON - AnimeLover on July 29, 2005
    Ooookaaaay....[takes deep breath] I AM SO SICK AND TIRED OF SAILOR MOON APPEARING IN LOVE HINA FANFICS!!!! WHY DO PEOPLE KEEP DOING THIS???!!! No seriously, why is it that this keeps popping up? I may not like crossovers very much, but I dont mind them much. But when people keep slapping Sailor Moon in everywhere, it just annoys the heck out of me.

    "But those Sailor girls are hot..."

    I laugh at this. You've got six hot/cute Hinata girls to work with. Actually, four since I don't think Kitsune or Motoko's hot in any way. Make Keitaro a demon and rape all of them for all I care, but you don't need to slap the Sailor Senshi into this. If you want to make a fanfic with Sailor Moon, cut out Keitaro and the other girls, slap in the same demon and a few characters he knows and then you can do the same exact fanfic in the Sailor Moon section. Now that that's been squared away...

    Minus the Sailor Moon crap, your fic was good. Doing it in the POV of the demon is a good idea, and you did it fairly well.
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  • From ANON - Demon Hunter on July 24, 2005
    you're a very good writer. One of few writers i know that can pull off this sort of thing. though i don't like the rape much. your story has potential. good luck
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  • From ANON - unknown on July 23, 2005
    very good story. other than the whole keitaro, seta when he was 14 thingy, good story...
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  • From ANON - Nexus51 on July 15, 2005
    Good fic, keep it up as i want to see what happens now.

    Best of luck

    Nexus51

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  • From ANON - RiderND on July 14, 2005
    wow intresting start I hope you update quickly I looking forward to it
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