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Reviews for Can\'t Get You Out of My Head

By : WickedDelights
  • From ANON - aenisses thai on February 02, 2006
    I enjoyed reading this story. You have some very original touches in this AU, and made me laugh out loud several times. I loved Soi's friendship with Amiboshi and Suboshi. At first, I thought "What, Amiboshi's in band?" and then smacked my forehead and said, "Of course!" ^^

    I was also entertained by the thought of Nakago eating a Big Mac and driving a Saturn; I appreciate this original depiction of him being normal middle-class instead of fabulously wealthy, as he usually is in AU fics.

    Your plot is developing quickly and logically, and I look forward to more. Also, your scene of Nakago in the shower was written very well, and was mercifully free of (inadvertently hunorous) slang terms for body parts. Nicely done.

    ~A~
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  • From ANON - me on November 04, 2005
    im so glad you finaly updated pleas update asap
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  • From ANON - KittyLynne on October 20, 2005
    That's okay, I understand all too well how Real Life can play havoc with a writing schedule. I'll look forward to seeing a new chapter whenever you can post it!

    every good wish,
    KittyLynne
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  • From ANON - KittyLynne on October 20, 2005
    So you're a coffee drinker too, eh? Cool! *toasts you with a Sumatra depth charge*
    This was a very cute chapter ...I can really see Nakago enjoying ticking Soi off. As evil as he is in the canon series, it always struck me that Nakago might have a pretty good sense of humor (at least he always seemed to get a kick out of the Suzaku warrior's antics)

    I like your attention to the little details, such as Amiboshi being in band, the directions the school secretary gave for getting to the school, and what kind of car Nakago drives. ^__^ I've never thought about what kind of car he might like in this world...but I figure that it would be something with a lot of power. :D

    There's another chapter for me to read yet, so I will stop here. More in a bit!

    every good wish,
    KittyLynne

    PS. Spelling, punctuation and grammar were very much improved in this chapter...great job!!


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  • From ANON - me on September 07, 2005
    wow i absolutley love this story at first i was hesitant to read it but now im realy glad i did pleas up date soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 28, 2005
    Neat story, I'd like to read more. However, it was riddled with spelling and grammar errors - too many to list in a review so I'll email an edited version.
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  • From KittyLynne on July 17, 2005
    Good for you for coming up with your own story!! *applauds loudly* There's definitely a lack of Nakago x Soi stories out there. That's really surprising, considering that the canon series left endless possibilities for writing a romance between them.

    I like the idea of them meeting in the modern world- I would think they'd be really drawn to each other. The short intro left me with a lot of questions though...in the next chapter, it would be great if you could add a few more details about this alternate universe they're in, their appearances and backgrounds. It sounds like they aren't in Japan, judging by the name of the teacher. :D ( Ms. Cuntworth?? *lol* If I had been cursed with a last name like that I'd change it asap!!)

    Good luck with the rest of the story!

    Best wishes,
    KittyLynne

    PS. Thank you so much for your review- you're very kind. ^__^ Hopefully I'll be able to update within the next week. ^_^

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