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Reviews for Love's Reveang

By : bloodstone
  • From on July 22, 2008
    Ryoma kun is nice to fuji and wants to take up for him. Like your chapter.
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  • From MoonsBlood on February 20, 2007
    Sweetheart, I like your story, but you seriously need to at least reread your own work before you post it, if not get a beta reader. One: you have tongue spelled at least four different way, none of which are correct. Two: it is spelled ‘jaw’ not ‘jall’. ‘Jall’ isn’t even a word. Three: I’m not sure what ‘disaponted’ is but disappointed is what I thought you might mean. One more and I will stop (though there are many, many more): I don’t know what ‘moun’ing is but I’m sure they were both probably moaning a lot. E-mail me sometime and I'd be willing to beta your work for you, including that which you already have up. send it to soubi.loveless@yahoo.com (this is my girlfriend's aff account)
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  • From ANON - Yumi-chan on August 28, 2006
    Okay I really like this story but there is one HUGE problem with it...You need to get some one to beta your work. I dont mean to be harsh but you have way to many spellng errors. If you need one, you can email me and I would be happy to do it for you. But that really needs to get fix because some of the wording is hard to understand. You may not speak english for a first language but if that is the case then you should definitely find some one to help you in correcting you work.
    Other wise, you story is really good and I enjoy it. I like this pairing alot so I am happy I am getting to read it
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  • From ANON - wired on December 13, 2005
    hey!!!!why not make another ryoxfuji.........i think fuji should be the uke...ne? i mean looks like a girl right...i betryoma would love that!!!
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  • From ANON - KiddoTrackStar on October 23, 2005
    HI! I really liked this story...The lemon was hot...but in chapter 7...I noticed a lot of spelling errors...AND I know you said they weren't beta'd but I'd like to help you with that...here are some words

    Officially; Relationship; Expression; Revenge; Disappointment; Seductively; Taken aback (these are the hardest ones, or some of the harder ones)

    I really really don't want to sound mean or anything...cuz I LOVE this story...But I can help you Beta it...or what not...just email me and let me know...I'm not the BEST, but I can definitely help you out with the spelling, grammar and punctuation. I rate this a 5 because it's that damn good...but I WILL help you with grammar and stuff if you want
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  • From ANON - Fujikochick on October 10, 2005
    I absolutely loved your lemon fic. It "was" damn good! I hope you write more though, because adultfanfiction would be at a loss without your awesome lemon fics. *Fujikochick laughing* I especially loved the part where Fuji slapped Tezuka! That was an awesome moment in Prince of Tennis fanfiction history!

    FANFICTION NO SUGOI!!!!
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  • From ANON - FirePeleKa on August 09, 2005
    YAY!!!!
    Chapter 8 was SO much better!!!
    Not just the lemon. *^__^*
    It was a presentation worthy of the story!
    Good Job!
    (small side note: Revenge ~__^ )
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  • From ANON - FirePeleKa on August 09, 2005
    Okay, I really like the story. It is a cute idea and a great beginning for the Trill Pair, my favorite pairing.
    The spelling and the sentence structure leave a LOT to be desired.
    Oy! I've never seen so many ways to spell tongue in my life.
    If you ever need a beta or someone to check over what you've written, please just let me know.

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  • From ANON - Genkai5000 on August 05, 2005
    Actually, (Since no one really reviewed) I really enjoyed this story. (Even though I am not a big fan of yaoi) Anyways, it was a great story! Kudos to you! You did a great job. You should write more fics. Your's has story to it which is good. ^^ Great job!
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