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Reviews for Fiance

By : DangerousFun4
  • From ANON - wired on December 13, 2005
    hi!!!!!!I LIKE THE PAIRING RYOXFUJI!! I THINK THEY'RE A GREAT COUPLE!!!MAYBE MAKE FUJI THE UKE...THAT WOULD BE FUN!!
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  • From ANON - RyuichiSakuma2 on November 26, 2005
    I like it! ^^ I wanted the Tezuka and Ryoma pairing, but oh well Momo and Ryoma is good too. On with your story! >.^
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  • From ANON - Emi Yuuji on November 12, 2005
    Hello. :)
    Interesting story, I must say... however... if you are seriously into fanfiction, I suggest you can go to the AFF Yahoo! groups for a beta.

    Don't take me wrong! This is indeed a sweet story with lots of yaoi, but sometimes, the spelling and grammar does confuse me a bit.
    However, the consideration of getting a beta is up to you. :)

    I hope it's not too late... I wish for Tezuka and Ryoma love.
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  • From ANON - Raichan on October 23, 2005
    O_O I agree with you on the part where Fuji's little brother left when seeing his older brother and Ryoma kissing. I would've stayed and watched. Man, I wish they were real and I could meet them. This story is great. I love Rage. I really want Ryoma and Tezuka together though it might be too late. Is the vote still taking place? I really hope it is. Can't wait until the next chapter. It's going to be fun to read.
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  • From ANON - Blackpearl on October 07, 2005
    Your paragraphs are messed up. Your characterization of Ryoma is horribly OOC.
    Your original character is a rip-off of Anna from Shaman King and a Mary Sue.

    Besides this your grammar and spelling definitely needs to see a beta-reader.
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  • From ANON - nekoya on September 30, 2005
    I love you for writing this story.
    And though I hate Rage for her bad additude (she even pushed Katsuo in the ground, BAD GIRL), I forgive her 'cause her background.
    Oh, and I've to say that some of the characters are little OOC, but I don't think it's that bad thing - I love when Ryo-chan gets all
    emotional and blushy and stuff. XD
    I'm so bad in english (it's funny how easier it's to read than write), that I think I'm not gonna say anything more than that. ^^;

    Ohohoh, of course I've to first vote for the pairing. :3
    I really like both FujiRyo and MomoRyo, and though I think MomoRyo would be so much cuter couple in this story, my votes goes
    for Fuji/Ryoma 'cause, ya know, THRILL PAIR IS LOVE.
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  • From ANON - Craze on September 23, 2005
    Rage sound a bit like Anna(Shaman King) and is she lesbian? sound like it too
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  • From ANON - principessa on September 11, 2005
    am i late..????? i'm a devoted shipper of TezuRyo...!! so please please pretty please... pair them together in this story...!!
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  • From ANON - LosingGrip on August 30, 2005
    I love the fic can't wait to see more of what you have to write just two things though.............................Where Are The Lemons?*Whines* and one more thing tell your brother from now on where he can stick it, cause I for one want more updates and I highly doubt he's the one updating for us. Other then that keep up the great work ^_~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - someone on August 26, 2005
    can i vote for fuji & tezuka & ryoma? erm...and update soon.

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  • From ANON - whateva on August 21, 2005
    lol i usually stop using the computer because of my lil bro!
    anyways great story, I really like your character "Rage"
    So...Rage and Sakuno???
    And...Momo and Ryoma???
    UPDATE!!!! >_< *punches het-fans to space*
    *gives cookies to yaoi-fans ^^*
    YAOI RULZ!!!!! YOU RULZ TOO!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chi on August 20, 2005
    WHy not a happy 3-some of TezuFujiRyo......?
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  • From ANON - Ryo=Momo\'s uke on August 14, 2005
    I want to see more momoryo action!! they are friends and should be hanging out more. my 5 sisters all agree that Momo ahould be Ryoma's uke and new fiance or boyfriend. Update soon. you can count all of us as 6 votes if you like.
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  • From ANON - ryosaku4evr on August 13, 2005
    i reli want 2 c sum ryosaku action
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  • From ANON - InnerMe on August 13, 2005
    rage is nice, but I dont think it's right to give her 90% of the story, It should be more ryoma-fucosed. too add someone original too the story is good, but dont make him (her) take over it, the last chapters were frankly, kind of boring comperd to the first chapters. KaidoMomom is better than InuiKaido Inui is the tipe that you cant make gay- like taka. as for my vote, I say TezukaEchizen.
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