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By : LaLapin
  • From sasunaru16 on August 08, 2012
    hehe mugen. that was really good! perfect capture of the characters. I would love if this were to turn into a longer story. I think it would be funny and great.
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  • From Aresy on July 14, 2008
    hehe this was good. IC i found it to be too. ^^ Good job. More? lol
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  • From lafemxtina on August 04, 2007
    You should continue...theres not enough Fuugen fics out there and I really like this one sooo....you should continue
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  • From on January 24, 2007
    If you don't continue this story, I will HURT you!!!!!! lol
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  • From ANON - Silent_Aura on January 09, 2007
    Do you have enough positive feedback yet?? Because dammit, this was incredible...it was seriously the HOTTEST Fuugen I have ever read!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE continue! ::gets down on knees:: Look, you're making me beg! I NEVER beg!!!! :*(
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  • From ANON - SASSIELASSIE11988 on December 13, 2006
    Daa-aaamn! THat was SO freaking good/hot/classy/all that yummy stuff! =-P Please say you'll continue...even though it looks like you won't since it's been so long. :-*( ::sniff sniff:: This is SO my favorite on here!
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  • From ANON - NikNik on July 26, 2006
    I liked this one shot. It was relatively better than a few others I've read. =D
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  • From ANON - anon on July 17, 2006
    i really wish you would add on! i loved readin this. it would be fuckin awesome if you updated
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  • From ANON - Toot on January 21, 2006
    that was definitely smexy!
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  • From ANON - eiskoenigen on December 08, 2005
    your story is so wonderful!! i want to read more... especially Mugen´s pursuit of Fuu.. i hope you write soon... much love.. ciao
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  • From ANON - stegy girl on December 06, 2005
    it was good but on parts u left things out like mugen taking his clothes off and them ending up on the ground but other than that it was great
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  • From ANON - romance_grl on November 22, 2005
    update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    hot and sext.......but still innocent on fuu's part
    great job!!!
    will you email me on the next update? please???!!!!
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  • From ANON - jessica on November 09, 2005
    I loved it. i feel like masturbating now... lol
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  • From ANON - Uncle_Bert_9731 on October 31, 2005
    I'm Sorry! I forgot to say that I could not tell that this was your first until your note at the end! BRAVO! and when I said that thing about capturing Fuu I didn't mean in a "it was fine" status I meant it the same as mugen! you captured her perfecty! I could actually feel how embarrassed she was! :p but yeah! O.o ......... >.< "YES!" ..... 'k bye!

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  • From ANON - Uncle_Bert_9731 on October 31, 2005
    this was fucking hot! wow! I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW WELL YOU CAPTURED MUGEN! I honestly think Fuu would be easier to capture, which you did well with her as well, but mugen was amazing! holy shit! I would say you might want to put spoiler in there, cuz I haven't seen the end yet and from what I read in your fic it sounded like the sunflower samurai is her father or something, so a spoiler would be nice. lets see... construcive.... if anything, a bit more detail? there was plenty but I love knowing what the environment looked like, I thought the path they were on was steep, but then I thought that mugen was lying down, so I got a bit confused there, but that's all... it truly is nicely put together! as for future fics, I kind of want to see the intimate side of mugen and not the "just for a fuck" side but the side that I don't know if it could actually exist.... but maybe if fuu got in enough trouble where her life was in danger and he came out, and maybe was shocked himself at this and hesitant... I don't know if it would work! but it would be nifty! anyway, sorry this is so long! I'll talk to you later! 'k bye!
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