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Reviews for Fire and Ice: Jin\'s Plan

By : LadyGray
  • From MibuWolf on November 03, 2007
    Very nice ^_- It's been a while since you checked on this story, right? You should continue writing it though. It's worth it.
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  • From ANON - Hestia on October 21, 2006
    Hot, romantic, good stuff!
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  • From ANON - NadaQueen on January 04, 2006
    Grammar is a good thing, if you don't want to edit, find someone who will. Other than that, really good; the sex scenes are frequent, descriptive, and constructed with a nice amount of perversity. Definitely keep that, in fact, add more! The plot is sex, which makes sense. Mugen and Jin are a little OOC, but that part is up to you. Get some kinky-ness in there, to make it very nice...hot-kinky, not scary-creepy-kinky...what the hell, it's your story, right? The setting is vague and thus slightly confusing and disorienting, so more detail there would be cool. Keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on October 31, 2005
    needed to have a better ending... left me wanting more from the characters.
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  • From ANON - fullmetalyoai on October 05, 2005
    so much angst! soo beautiful! *tear*
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  • From ANON - fullmetalyoai on October 05, 2005
    I thought they were in the hot springs. where did the bed come from? oh well. hot stuff!
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  • From laurabryannan on October 01, 2005
    You go girl! I was beginning to think you were never gonna update this story. It was great, and well worth the wait! Hope there's more.
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  • From laurabryannan on August 31, 2005
    Horray! Hot, and believeable. I *hate* uke Jin stories--too out of character, IMHO. Your's was great. Don't let anyone tell you Jin ain't seme! Hope you write more. Great first effort!
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  • From natsume54 on August 15, 2005
    it's awesome please keep up the wonderful work. i really cant wait to read more!
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  • From FullMetalBlunt on August 12, 2005
    That was very good...hot O_^ I like the hot spring part the best, heh, but all the scenes were sweet. The underlying emotions add another level to it as well. You portray the characters thought's in a smooth way. Plus I think you're very in character. Nicely writen, I hope there is more... ^_^
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  • From LolaStar on August 09, 2005
    I really liked that. It's not often that you see Jin taking control with his passive personality, but you pulled it off very well. There were a few mistakes here and there, but overall it was a pretty awesome fic. I hope you write some more to either this story or something else Samurai Champloo.
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  • From ANON - everyday angel on August 08, 2005
    Wow, for a first fic that wasn't bad. A few gramatical errors here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed. Next time be more consistant with your discription. All in all it was pretty good. Nice work.
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  • From ANON - fruits of Eos on August 08, 2005
    WOO! that was TOTALLY hot. maybe a little out of character, but HOT. dominating jin is so incredibly yummy, and mugen gettin some smutty goodness is even hotter. meoooow. tell me there's a sequel!!
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  • From on August 06, 2005
    Very nice, the detail was good and you kept them nicely in character. A little detail though would be to put a space between each paragraph since it's a bit hard on the eyes to read everything smooshed together
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  • From ANON - ae-ran on August 05, 2005
    finally! a dominant jin with mugen yaoi! i liked how you still managed to keep Mugen in character (being crudely honest) The only thing i didn't like was the lack of quotation marks (it was a bit confusing in some small parts) but overall, i could understand what was going on-- so, good story!
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