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Reviews for Speechless

By : Meirav
  • From ANON - Michiru on October 07, 2005
    I think I may have commented on this story when you first posted it on livejournal, although I'm not really sure. In any case, although I usually enjoy fluff and stories with a 'lighter' tone to them, I did enjoy this one, as well. It's somewhat depressing to think of Fai being put in such a situation, but I'm glad that he finally became stronger in the end. You know what I think would be really great? If you could right another chapter, but this time from Kurogane's view. You get a general idea of what he's saying/thinking in the story, but I would like to actually see the story from his point of view. That way, we would also understand what the other people are saying, as well. I think it would 'complete' the story. :) What do you think?
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  • From ANON - kinky lurker on August 15, 2005
    wow. that was very good. i haven't gotten to shurac in the manga yet, but i really can't wait... but, this story was absolutely gorgeous. it was a wonderful read and i can't wait to read more from you. keep it up!

    ~hanyou-elf
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