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Reviews for Ash X Joy

By : Jani
  • From RAW19 on October 07, 2017

    Quite an interesting story that i hope is someday contnued.


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  • From kamiyoni on November 17, 2006
    i think you should proably continue this fic. i for one think there should be more fanfics of this genre because to many people foucs on obvious pairings thus i can't stand Ash/Misty or May not out of like or dilike but because it's been done to death. i'd like to see Ash with more older women like maybe Flannery,Clair,Jenny or Jessie.
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  • From ANON - pimp master on January 22, 2006
    is there going to be any more like that that got me off bad ^_^
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  • From ANON - latest member on December 22, 2005
    Is this a one shot or are you gonna finish it
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  • From ANON - Jani on October 20, 2005
    What makes you think this has anything to do with Misty? She is not in the fucking story. Ash does not like that stupid bitch. He is way too good for her.
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  • From ANON - Brock on October 18, 2005
    i loved it, but what will happen when misty finds out?
    the sound will get her attention and she can walk in on them!

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  • From ANON - Goggle on September 26, 2005
    For a PWP it was good. It could have been more discriptive though. Also for a point of realism Ash should have been overcome by pleasure of having sex so suddenly. I mean if he had never felt it before and was suddenly inside a women why would he be struggeling to get free?

    Also one type:
    "She climbed off of him and positioned herself just right to where she could such his young huge cock"
    such should be suck.

    Anyway that's my two cents.
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  • From ANON - Stuffy on September 20, 2005
    you know... you should spend a little more time on the description to make it seem a little more realistic.
    Even if you were thinking of a PWP, you could have characterized them much better than you have here. Just a hint!
    ==Telluba==
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  • From ANON - Ian on September 08, 2005
    Ya know.... someone should write a fic where Ash actually goes around fucking all the girls he defeats in pokemon battels..... *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Blaze Waterflower on August 26, 2005
    These are the kind I like Ash and Joy. Ash and anyone really. Poeple do alot of Ash and Misty one and I like things that are differnt so keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Master Of the Poke World on August 25, 2005
    Good start.You gonna continue it right
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  • From ANON - pokenapper *sleeps through pokemon* on August 24, 2005
    Really good work there even though it was a bit short. Hope you have a sequel and expand on it.
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  • From ANON - Blaze W. on August 24, 2005
    It's a good story. I like ones that are not just ash and misty. so keep it up okay.
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