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Reviews for The Morning Ritual

By : laurabryannan
  • From sheraven on January 20, 2008
    The way you made it a contest was excellent, and that each had a different idea of victory was a stroke of genius. Also, the fact that there was no particular victor was how I imaged it would be between Jin and Mugen. The action was hot and the writing clear. Thank you.
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  • From Aresy on December 16, 2007
    lol what a lovely comment at the end by Mugen. :P Heheh nice fic, they always have to make everything into a game of who's better..so true. They were ic, very good.
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  • From Dotowe on December 04, 2007
    Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan! That could've unraveled into something really HOT! Not that it wasn't really hot already. I would love to see a sequal! I loved how both of them went into it thinking they would win over on the other. Very in-character. I loved it. Please do more!

    ~Gloria
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  • From inuyasha7885 on November 05, 2007
    this is really good-I loved it! I hope u write some more chapters-it'll def be interesting to see who ends up being seme and uke-or they could take turns! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Felidae on October 30, 2007
    *blinks* Uhh, ok, I'm trying to come up here with a really good review, but my brain just backfired-damn, girl, you really got the guys' characters down to the point! That was so-so.. amazing, insightful and hot, I won't be able to sleep for a month! Cudos to you!^^
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  • From morbiDreamscape on July 17, 2007
    So excellent. I love how you have both their perspectives, and how both are waiting to see what they've always seen, and yet are surprised again and again. I REALLY love the "draw" at the end. Such an IC thing for them to do... XD Great writing!
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  • From ANON - aoh on June 20, 2007
    that was great, thanks!
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  • From fuzzybunnytoo on May 25, 2007
    It's me again. You updated this one and I had to read "AGAIN". Gee, I love this story. I enjyed it as much as I have the other times, maybe enen more. At the end i always clap and say yeah!!!!!!!!!! Such a great fic.
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  • From Fai on May 15, 2007
    That was all kinds of win. ^_^ much love for writing this.
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  • From ANON - Hestia on October 21, 2006
    Great stuff! I love the internal dialogue! The kiss was excellent!

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  • From ANON - Tera McCaslin on January 29, 2006
    HA! I FOUND YOU! YAY! I'M SO EXCITED! I'm gonna read all your stuff in celebration. ::celebrates::

    ~Tera
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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on January 17, 2006
    Nyaaa, that was delish. *runs off to your other writings*
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  • From ANON - taro_gurl on November 06, 2005
    That was sooooo very very hot.
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  • From ANON - fuzzybunnytoo on October 31, 2005
    this was sooooooooooooo well written with the inner most thoughts of each character. I reaelly love the way you got into their heads and i love the ending. Good for you. Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Catullus on October 20, 2005
    Mmm, I loved this. I especially appreciated that you distributed the power more equally. So many writers put Jin strictly on the bottom. I guess because he's quite or something. I find it highly annoying. Sorry for venting. I really did enjoy this fic, though. Excellent writing, the characterization was dead on. Keep on, keepin' on.
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