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Reviews for A Helping Hand

By : laurabryannan
  • From IlDolceSuono on December 03, 2009
    Absolutely delicious.
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  • From sheraven on January 20, 2008
    Oh, that was lovely. There are many writers out there who pull Jin out of character because his conservative personality is difficult to write in a way that holds the reader's attention. You did an excellent job, and I enjoyed how he stayed reserved. Thank you.
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  • From Safir84 on December 13, 2007
    What a lovely one-shot, I really liked it! The portrayal of the characters were great, just like in the show, good work! The smut scene was great too, very sweet and sensual!


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  • From ANON - aoh on June 20, 2007
    this story is really like the original anime when it comes to depth! i liked that in the anime and i'm happy to find it here, too. i liked the sexual aspect, too, i thought it was subtle but erotic *^-^* thanks a lot!

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  • From ANON - Tiger on February 13, 2006
    Oh, this was too cute. How sweet of Jin to help her like that. ^^ I just wish that he DID desire her as a woman... ;_;
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  • From ANON - lstdpnthght on January 18, 2006
    Hm, looks like the review didn't show up... oh well. I love how you keep your characters very in character.
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  • From hanyouinu on November 15, 2005
    Good! Sex scene could of been a little better and longer but it was good i enjoyed it :)
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  • From cowgirl62687 on October 21, 2005
    Ah, ah, ah... gotta keep going! This is a great, great way to start something BIG!! I don't understand Jap culture so I don't know how accurate this is, but I liked the ideas and how it came together! Hope to see another chap soon, please consider it!
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  • From ANON - sesshy_lover on October 15, 2005
    O_O WOW... I really loved this SC fanfic... mostly cause there arent a lot of Jin Fuu stories out there!!!... teeheehee!!!... Please make a conitnuation for this story PLEASE!!!... >_< THanks and much love... sesshy...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2005
    Just one (nitpicky) problem- Geishas did not have sex, they only provided their company and conversation. Courtesons provided their bodies. The difference is whether the obi was tied in the front or back- Geishas' were tied in back, Courtesons in front (easy access).
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  • From ANON - dinloth on September 16, 2005
    it's a very beautiful story. although I prefer Mugen :D but Jin with his experience mmm.this was really nice. Buuut you should make the whole scene with Jin and Fuu slower and more delicate. She's a child! Delicate and I'll be satisfied :) great work. Please continue
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  • From ANON - everyday angel on September 10, 2005
    I smell a threeeeesoooome.....
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  • From ANON - mims on September 02, 2005
    LOVED IT!

    of course i'm more a jin/fuu fan anyway, i completely understand that jin just wanted to have a good experience and that he doesn't desire her in that way, but still...it was beautiful *sob*
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