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Reviews for The Elements Trilogy

By : PyroAngelEz
  • From sheraven on January 20, 2008
    I love that Jin is the one who takes care of the rest of them. And I really enjoyed the little cinnamon twist right at the end. Nice job of keeping them in character, thank you.
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  • From ANON - deadly1 on July 06, 2006
    please, please udate I am so loving this story
    right now, i can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - somerandomgirl on July 06, 2006
    i thought there was supposed to be three??! come on! you should really update this. i hope you do...
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on January 27, 2006
    Think you did a great job on this one, I loved every bit of it, and I think you and whoever helped you are very skilled writers, Keep up the good work, and please email me when you have made the third chapter, I am curious to know what happends, although i have a few guesses as to what will happen. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2005
    that was hot!!!!!
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  • From Jags on December 09, 2005
    Very good please finish. :)
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  • From ANON - Sam on December 09, 2005
    Ok...Well I have only read the first part...And I absolutely love it!!! I'm still currently in the middle of watching the Champloo series and what you guys wrote is so unbelieveably hawt...........whew! :faints: I must say Jin is my favorite and you portray all of the characters exactly how they should be...(Some people tend to make Jin too rigid and almost preppy like)...
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  • From kimper on November 27, 2005
    can't wait to see what happens next!

    kimper :)
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  • From ANON - Rowan on November 25, 2005
    I don't usually read Yaoi, but this was good, and I want to see what happens in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kimper on September 28, 2005
    can't wait to see what happens next....nicely written :)
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  • From ANON - SMS on September 16, 2005
    BAH!!! hurry. Im very picky about my Mugen/Jin but when you throw in a threesome teaser I was excited...please hurry, please? ^_^
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  • From ANON - everyday angel on September 10, 2005
    I really like the idea of this trilogy, and I'm surprised no one else has attempted something like it (the trio vs. yuck weather). Switching the pov so often was confusing though; you might want to work on that next time. And lord knows I'm guilty of this as well--your brain starts working faster than your fingers can type--but remember to watch out for those gramar mistakes, i.e. leaving out words and/or letters or making silly mistakes you normally wouldn't. Anywho, good job, you two. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2005
    hehe yes i liked it Fuu at the end funny
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on August 31, 2005
    omg that was fantabulous, please keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From LolaStar on August 31, 2005
    Hey, you should update, yep. I liked your story a lot. There were a few typos here and there, but definitely nothing that put your story down. So please continue soon.
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