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Reviews for Under the knife

By : Didders
  • From ryukai on September 08, 2008
    Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease continue this on edge of seat here!!!!
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  • From ANON - will on November 29, 2006
    Finally!I were longing for a fic with this couple!When are you gonna post next chapter?
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  • From ANON - Ariel on September 17, 2005
    Please! I need to read more! If I don't my head WILL explode
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  • From ANON - Elmyrah Insanity on September 05, 2005
    My brain depends on this story. Please update!
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  • From on August 31, 2005
    I'm a fan of this coupling, so I did enjoy the fic. Good use of accents (where their understandable, but clearly heard), and very sense-oriented. You describe things in a very clear manner that really improves the entire story. Good dialogue, very in character, and so on.

    But I do have some critiques.

    You should space your paragraphs, and always start new dialogue in a new paragraph. Some of us - like me - have to wear glasses and aren't the best at focusing. aff.net doesn't let us change the font size (which is terrible because when I'm tired, everything runs together)

    There are a few grammar and spelling errors (like 'dieing' should be dying. The real meaning of 'dieing' is to cut or stamp material. ^-^), and I suggest having someone beta the story. It would really improve the overall quality.
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