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Reviews for A Wolf in Sheep\'s Clothing

By : Shadowsmurmur
  • From ANON - Birman on October 02, 2006
    Hey, this is bloody cool. Please don't drop it. Update soon, yeah?
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  • From ANON - Lyren-E.A. on July 10, 2006
    Excellent, I love the mystery and intrege as well as the unknow in the story. I hope you dont tarry on the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Hope theres more blood shed and anger and whatever your imagination decides to in put.


    Lyren-E.A.
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  • From ANON - Connie on December 09, 2005
    Oh YES! Wonderful, absolutely wonderful! But please tell me it will be Alucard and Seres? I love the pairing, but can't seem to find all that many. I love how you had him worried over her, though it may have been a tad bit OOC for him. Personally, I think Alucard does care for Seres, but knows he cannot let those feelings show, especailly as he wants her to become strong enough to stand on her own and not be enslaved as he was--but those are just my beliefs. Not that you have to believe them to...but anyways...

    I simply loved the story and cannot wait until you updat! It's just grand to see nice long chapters too! I'll be biting my nails until the next!

    Thanks,

    Connie
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2005
    very good second chapter now update again soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - Jess on September 30, 2005
    I love the idea for the story, you're a very good writer. But you need a beta, someone to go over your work once you've finished with it; and I suggest you get a Hellsing fan to beta this particular story. You've spelt the names of some characters incorrectly. Keep going though, you're doing really well, I'd love to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Kittykins on September 15, 2005
    Yeah, that I replacing the U confounded me, as well. But the thing I was most concerned with was Alucard's character. He would have sensed the ambush. Would have sensed the other Freaks. He would have known that his fledgling was being attacked and that she had been hurt. He would have smelled her blood immediately. He would have immediately know something was wrong when he no longer felt Seras' presence. He's her master, after all. You're portraying Alucard as a vampire far younger and far weaker than he actually is. You're underestimating him.

    As for the story, I'm interested to see what happens next. It has the potential to be good. It also has the potential to be not so good, too. We'll see! I'm hoping you come up with an awesome plot. Keep it up! Don't let bad reviews (if you receive any) discourage you! I'll be checking back when you update. Good luck!
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  • From ANON - S/L on September 15, 2005
    It's AlUcard not Alicard. Great story btw, really interested on what happened with Seras. Spell that name anyway you want but Alucard just has to be right.
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