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Reviews for Reaching for the Sun

By : Tercanonuruvaya
  • From kati on December 15, 2007
    yatta! yuki/haru! NUM NUM NUM. I like your writing, however, it does feel as if you are in a bubble. Some imagery and scenery would be appreciated, thankyou!
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  • From AkitoSouma on July 06, 2007
    I liked this a lot! Akito was very in character; fascinating, beautiful and frightening as always. The other characters are portrayed well, and the plot is very interesting. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on September 30, 2005
    Can't wait for more. I'm fangirling over this. XD
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  • From ANON - Jayn on September 21, 2005
    OMG! Don't stop now!!
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  • From promise2003 on September 21, 2005
    Could I make a request of you??? Would you mind skipping all your classes and glueing your hands to your keyboard and write more for your fans? Tee-hee...I know its a completely unreasonable request.

    It has been a really good story so far and I am interested to see where you take it. Write more soon.
    ~Lemon Drops~
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  • From ANON - The Dragon on September 21, 2005
    OOO hahaha that was so evil. ^0^ Poor Haru-kun. The story is great and just what will Akito do????0__0 OO dear,OOOdear!!!Update soo you hear me!!!SOON!!! And---what's that sound?*listen so the sound of growing wind* Its-O no its.....No no dont eat me Rits Please!!!to review ya for a while cause of Rita which now offical a 4 O__O;;; Man what is it with these stupid storms this year? O well see ya soon(hopefully) and keep up the good work ^__^.
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  • From ANON - kat8cha on September 21, 2005
    You Meanie!!!!!! How dare you stop it there!!! :x Grrr! Lovely and suspenseful! ^_^ Really enjoying this! I luv anything with a delightfully perverse Shi-chan! And akito's arrival was wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Nanaka on September 18, 2005
    I love it love it love it..... i can't wait to read the next chap
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  • From ANON - Talia on September 16, 2005

    A few things to say here.

    1) “which will be shown with little ~~~'s going...” if you change it to “which will be shown with the little ~~~ going...” You don’t need an apostrophe (which made it grammatically incorrect)

    2)Your word usage is amazing! One can tell you spend sometime thinking about the right word to use instead of the one that pooped into your head first.

    3) Good use of imagery. I could really get a sense of how Haru was feeling.

    Keep it up!

    -Talia
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 14, 2005
    ~blink blink~ Coool!

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