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Reviews for Makoto

By : abcd
  • From ANON - ree on August 01, 2006
    another amazing fanfic that i quite enjoy reading about including the ones about ami and minako. continue writing more please.
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  • From Nao on January 09, 2006
    O_O wow *chuckles*
    just wow
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on September 23, 2005
    hi btw I reviewed the ami one? did you delete it? I was nice and at least I reviewed!

    I thought you were going somewhere with this one.......then you didn't, if you would just take maybe 2 hours more time and put a "little" story in it like WHY she needed the money and WHY her father was a prev on top of the uncle(which was a bit much) and WHERE did the monster come from, why didn't she kill it and WHY did she only do it three night

    and you are aware that all that would KILL her right? and it would take more then a day of sleep

    but the concept was okay and it could have been very good, as plain smut it wasn't bad
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