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By : Skyclad
  • From Jessy8 on November 23, 2009
    You ever going to update?
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  • From PorkChopExpress on June 22, 2008
    I think it would be a bit harder to take Makoto down but it's still a fun story to read. Interesting situations she gets put in, particularly in the latest chapter. I hope to see an update soon.
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  • From LocalChan on April 13, 2008
    wow, a nice and unique way to tell the story, I really enjoyed it, please kee up the good work.
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  • From Hyboria on April 12, 2008
    Wohoo!!! Finally you've updated Sky, with yet another hot chapter if I may add.

    I really liked this chapter, Atsuko is a great new addition. It's surprising to see to what lengths Makoto is willing to go to keep the whole situation a secret, it was really erotic and at the same time interesting to see how Makoto's character develops over the cause of the story.

    As a suggestion, I hope that he next chapter is based in Makoto's school.

    I hope you'll update
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2008
    This was one of the most erotic stories I've read on AFF! You honestly deserve and award or something! The whole bit with the construction workers in the warehouse was brilliant and hot at the same time! It was unbelievably sexy! And the descriptions were fantastic! And here I thought mine were good!

    I actually said "Awesome!" out loud when Atsuko gave the guys Makoto's phone number. I don't know if you're planning on writing more to the story, but if you are I honestly hope to see more with Makoto and those guys. Those scenes were incredible! BRAVO!
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  • From Hyboria on November 10, 2007
    All I can do is keep coming back to check, I still hope for an update Sky.
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  • From Hyboria on October 13, 2007
    I keep coming back to check Sky, in the hope that you might have updated the story. Well I see there's still nothing, I can understand that if you are busy it can't be helped, please let as know how this story will be set for the near future. Are you planning to update it etc.

    I've e-mailed you, I'm not sure if you're still using the email address that you have listed back in 2005, maybe you'd be so kind to update it with an active e-mail account, since I have a few ideas for a next chapter and would like to mail them to you.

    I was also going over the rewviews and someone suggested that the next chapter be set in Makotos school. I think thats a good idea, as it would add the chance that they may be discovered.

    If you can please drop me a mail, my address is palmbi@hotmail.co.uk.

    Hope to hear from you soon, and please continue, I'll keep coming back to check.
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  • From Hyboria on September 29, 2007
    Ohh still no upadte *cry* pelase continue skyclad, I was really looking forwrad to a new chapter.

    If you are having trouble coming up with ideas, I could mail you with some.

    Update soon please.
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  • From Hyboria on September 29, 2007
    OMG this story is so hot. Please update it skyclad.

    I enjoyed it a lot. Espcially the second chapter. Just one request please don't take another 2 yrs to update ^^ it would really kill me.


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  • From Hyboria on September 26, 2007
    I really liked this story, I can't wait to see it contiuned. For a next seting, Makoto's school would be a nice idea.

    I'm looking forward to a next chapter, please update this story Skyclad.
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  • From Dopo on September 16, 2007
    I enjoyed reading this story, both chapters where great, although the second one is much better. The Build up to the sex was very nice.

    Will you be continuing Skyclad? please let us know.
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  • From Which on August 31, 2007
    Well this was a nice fic for a change. I remember reading the first chapter back when you first uploaded it. It was decent story and fun to read.

    As for the second chapter, i see that you have updated just recently ( Fairly long break). It shows that your writing has improve over the cause of those two years, your writing is more detailed, and your paragraphing is done well to. As for the contend, the build up to the actually sex scene was great, though for your next chapter you should look into another theme, maybe a one on one with either of the two boys.

    I hope you are planning to have the next chapter up soon, it would be a shame to have to wait another two years.

    Overall great read, and it was interesting to see the improvements in your writing.

    Update soon. Please!
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  • From Hyboria on August 25, 2007
    Wow, now that was hot. First quality Makoto Fic I have read in this section. Will you please continue writing skyclad. This fanfic has post 10.000 hits. Sadly it seems no one can be bothered to at least review the story.

    Please continue, pretty please ^^
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  • From MobbyDick on August 12, 2007
    My God Still no Update, it's the ned off the world as we know it!!!!

    Please update soon Skyclad. About my little outburst just ignore it I am a bit of an emtional person ^^
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  • From MobbyDick on July 22, 2007
    Wicked, I wouldn't have thought this story would be updated after such a long time. Great new chapter, I love how you have worked the humiliation into the story that alone deserved five Stars. Hope you will continue with this, can't wait to read all the other ways that makoto will be humiliated. Maybe in the next chapter you could add a little anal into the mix, Since the Boys have not explored that part off Makoto'sbody yet. The next chapter should be in a public place, where the is a chance that theyw ill be caught while they are at it.

    Hoooooooooooooooope for another great update.
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