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Reviews for Secrets of the Heart

By : Crya2Evans
  • From ANON - Lumivalkea on January 02, 2006
    First time reviewing your work, but I have read all your Samurai Champloo stories have posted here so far, I think.... Absolutely loving them, keep up the good work, do continue this story!

    I haven't dared to write SC myself yet because I just don't trust myself to characterize Mugen, hehe.
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  • From laurabryannan on January 02, 2006
    Horray! More smut and yummy mush. What a great way to start the new year. Thanks for posting!
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  • From ANON - kimper on January 02, 2006
    Nicely Done! I can't wait to see what happens next!

    kimper :)
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  • From ANON - SpBuffy on January 01, 2006
    Still loving the story and I thought the fight scene was just fine. Too much detail on those scenes can sometimes become more of a distraction so...good work. Looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Kelly on December 30, 2005
    What a sequel! I have to say I am quite impressed with this fic. I adore Mugen and Jin's relationship, and how Fuu is portrayed. Please don't sell yourself short, you are a very good writer, you shouldn't make negative comments about your work! ^^ I thought that fight scene was excellent, and very discriptive. Keep it up, love! ~_-
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  • From ANON - Johnhyh on December 21, 2005
    that was the greatest thing i've read

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  • From ANON - Itaika Ichimori on November 27, 2005
    In the previous chapter, the third footnote, wasn't that the woman that poisoned Mugen with the mushroom thing in one of the earlier episodes. -isn't sure if she's remembering right or not-
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  • From ANON - sharon on November 25, 2005
    Just wanted to say I have been reading "Secrets of the Heart" and eagerly await each new chapter. I think you have caught the fact that both men are "walking wounded", emotionally, and can give one another more than anyone else could.
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  • From laurabryannan on November 09, 2005
    Just wanted to add that the whole peppermint oil thing gave me a *great* idea for a story, so I had to come back and say thank you!
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  • From laurabryannan on November 08, 2005
    Hot as usual, my dear, but I have a question. Peppermint oil...up the ass?!? Yikes! Girl, the volitile compounds in oils like peppermint, clove and eucalyptus are *really* intense. There is a high menthol content in them and they burn like something awful on sensitive tissues. Think of how toothpaste tingles in your mouth and you might get a sense of how the actual oil might feel in such a sensitive place. Since you didn't go on to describe Mugen shrieking after said application, I'm thinking you're not aware that you might want to switch the oil you're using to something benign (i.e., a real cooking oil and not an essential oil). Otherwise, lots of great mush and I can't wait to see what you do next!
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  • From ANON - lelann on November 08, 2005
    oohh, lovely chapter....i wonder how he knows kenji....i can't wait to see what u cook up
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  • From ANON - Kenyanboa on November 07, 2005
    Okay, I've been consistently asking for reviews on my few fics so I figure I should probably put out too! I liked this fic enough that I read all the available chapters one after another, and the prologue fic too (grand total five) and I'm disappointed there isn't already more! I think this could developoe into a pretty good story line if we get more plot to it. I know how PWP can somehow turn into a fully developed arc. Keep your muse fed!
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  • From ANON - soul on October 25, 2005
    oh i can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From laurabryannan on October 25, 2005
    Fun and romantic. I think you're doing well here. As for their clothes, Jin wears hakama, so that is right. I always call Mugen's pants pants, because they're not really hakama. There has been much discussion about what Jin's wearing on top on the Amalgam site, the conclusion being that Jin wears both an ankle-length kimono and juban that tucks into his hakama. So, I've changed my own fics from gi (to the hips) back to kimono, for what it's worth. On Samin's site, she has a drawing of Jin dressing/undressing which shows what he's probably wearing on top. Great site! The URL is http://yuhoyuho.cool.ne.jp/saim/ and the picture I'm talking about is the one she drew 2004-07-05. Enjoy! Again, nice effort. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Lady Gray on October 24, 2005
    Yeah!! I loved the prequel to this and I am happy you decided to continue! Now enters Fuu!! very cool!
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