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Reviews for Rebel

By : Yaoilady
  • From darkchaos on September 09, 2007
    cool! poor luffy. any chance at a continuation?
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  • From ANON - Forsaken_Sorceress on January 07, 2007
    This story is GREAT !!! please keep it up :D when is the next update due ?!?!?! please keep us fans posted ;)

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  • From ANON - losthimagain on September 10, 2006
    *blinks* Cool. I want more. Now. Soon. Now. Please. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 05, 2006
    One thing I just want to point out from being an EMT: It's medically impossible for someone to swallow their own tongue. You'd want to leave a seizing person alone, actually, because they can thrash to greatly that they will injure themselves if held down or break teeth if something is put in their mouth. You have it right about choking on their own vomit. Very rarely will a person vomit in a seizure, though. Even Grand Maul seizures rarely induce vomiting. I liked the story on a whole, though. I'd like to see you update and explore other pairings, you mentioned maybe Luffy/Sanji. I'd like to see how you'd write that. =D
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  • From ANON - sinsoftime on January 28, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!! WHAT'S WRONG WITH LUFFY!!?!?!?!?! AND WHY DOESN'T HE WANT MEDICAL HELP?!?!?!?!?!?!?! i HAVE TO KNOW!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! I'M REALY RESPERATE AT THE MAMENT, AND YOU HAVE LEFT ME WONDERING!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ryu_meijin on November 26, 2005
    please updat soon this story had great potential!
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  • From ANON - Yukiko on October 07, 2005
    what has he ?
    what happens to him 'worry like hell'
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  • From LadyNarutoChan on October 05, 2005
    Awww.... What's going on ?
    Poor Luffy, hope that it's not a deadly illnes ! >.
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  • From firebirdy on October 05, 2005
    That was great. You need to update this fic and Buried. I like that one! I'm evil. Muhahaha!
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  • From ANON - Nashwa on October 05, 2005
    Yay! My favorite One Piece couple! Poor Luffy . . . keep going! It's great!
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