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Reviews for A Mangled Affair

By : loche606
  • From ANON - femaleYuki on November 20, 2005
    This is a really great story please keep going would love to read more...I like the plot..thank-you for posting and writing this
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  • From ANON - chocho on November 14, 2005
    I love this story, though I gotta say I *hate* Yuki/Tohma fics. Anyway, I hope everything works out for the best. I know how I wan this story to end, but as a writer myself, I know that these things write themselves and some times it does not matter what we want. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on November 13, 2005
    Cliff hanger!!! Argh! I really want Shuichi to stay with Ryuichi. I think that it's really courageous of Ryuichi to show Shuichi the othet side of him. I do hope that that decision has not worked against him. more?
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on November 13, 2005
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! *cries* you little tease, what's his answer??!! *cries more* tezzie damn, that was a great chapter.. full of juicy bittersweet angst.. dude, the shuu/yuki scene made me feel teary, and it was so sweet and sad... and yuki not wanting to swallow for touma when he did for shuu was sweet too... and damn dude, yuki hella schemed to find ryu's place!! but dude, i'm STILL all gung-ho about ryu/shuu, despite you continuously pulling at the heart strings for yuki/shuu!! kikumaru the cat is purrrfect heehee, and the ryu/shuu scene was soooooo hot *drools* needy-lusty shuu being dominant-uke *oooooohh* poor ryu, he knew something was wrong...hurry and put out the next chapter so i don't hafta be in suspense so much!! *poolyeyes*

    praise tezzie, ryoma and fuji, mada mada dane!

    *huggles*
    ~crys
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  • From ANON - Unknown on November 06, 2005
    me: What an interesting story! I love Eiri bashings!! >D

    Alter Ego: Ok, don't go spazz on us now...

    me: DIE EIRI! DIE!

    Alter Ego: Too late... T_T

    Me: Anyway, the choice is obvious my friend-Ryuichi!!!!!!! He's sweet and funny! Beside, ya gotta love the ability to go from chibi-mode to intense mode in less than a second.

    Alter Ego: I have to agree with Mr. Stupid over here. Personally, Eiri needs to quit acting like a spolied brat jacka-

    Me: EGO! 0,0

    Alter Ego: and stop abusing the poor kid. Oh, and other me, I can swear all I want, thanks.

    Me: Meanie. Anyway, Shuuichi should end up with Ryuichi! Cause he's cool! ^-^

    Alter Ego: You done ranting yet?
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  • From ANON - Houseki on November 05, 2005
    Yuki/Shuu!!! for sure! ,ah poor yuki is so deoressed and in love gah give him his shuu back!! *cries* yaay to yuki for callin out shuu's name both times, crying, AND sleepin on shuu's side of the bed!! yuki doesn't always have to be an ass yaayy!! lol

    gaah! hurt touma!! he is evil! and shocker on the friendship..wow. lol ryuichi is so sweet...but shuu belongs w/ yuki! ryu should go hook up w/ tats: or K ^__^ hehe love it doll! motto!

    nic
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  • From ANON - Quichi on November 04, 2005
    I really think Ryuichi x Shuuichi is sweet. I could really care less who Yuki or Tohma ends up with, the way they're acting. So long as they stay out of Ryu and Shuu's way. They are so obsessive! They need to get over themselves. Or all over eachother. Either way.
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  • From ANON - sansty on November 04, 2005
    WAAAAAA I REALLY LOVE THIS FIC! I WANNA READ MORE!!!!! WA
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  • From ANON - Ray4Ever on November 02, 2005
    I definitly want Shuu to end up with Ryou who treats him so much better and I think Touma should end up alone. He's too nasty and deserves it. Maybe Yuki can meet an OC and do things right and they'll be happy together. Hiro and fujisaki make a good couple.
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on November 01, 2005
    waaaaahh!! i loved it! poor yuki! omtezzie, yuki-angst!! this chapter was sooooo great! ryu goin off on touma, touma *finally* gettin some from yuki, then havin it IMMEDIATELY taken away by yuki callin shuu's name!! nyahaa!! ryu tellin shuu it's not an act w/him *awwwwwwhearteyes* and, of course, the random suguru/hiro scene!! i love his nightly ritual! and his stepstool! heheheheheheh now, where oh where did ryu go hmmmmm??? hope you write the next chaper soooooon *glomps*

    praise tezzie, the trinity, moses-eiji and st. yukimura!

    ~crys
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  • From ANON - Shiba on October 30, 2005
    well i finally took the time to read this (after i read the first part like a week ago) and i really really liked it ^^ i cant wait for the next chappie but please try to hurry with it!!!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on October 24, 2005
    *sigh* pullin the heart strings again... now i'm all "ohh poor yuki!!" *cries* and i am SO gung-ho for ryu/shuu, yet you know just the strings to pull lol... but anyway, of course i LOVE the suguru/hiro randomness, and that sugu would be seme in the relationship, despite being smaller (yay for breaking yaoi stereotypes) cuz he is SO the dominant one dude i swear... lil touma jr lol... also, looooved the ryu/shuu fluff... and ryu's line!! “If that happens when I wear your clothes, I am gonna wear them every day.” heehee anyway, ooooh touma gonna come into the ryu/shuu scene next? eeeep!! can't wait to reeeeeeeaaaaaaaaad iiiiiiiit!!

    love ya! (praise the trinity, mada mada dane)
    ~crys
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  • From ANON - Houseki on October 23, 2005
    ahhhh you made a sweet yuki!! and a mean shuu!! er ryu!! lol this was another great chap...my yuki cried!! *cries with yuki* shuu will come back, hopefully! umm...wow, i'm trying to think of all the things i totally liked about the story, but as you know, i'm drunk, and now everything is escaping my mind, hence why i'm writing this in IM and then going to paste into a review later when aff is up and going again *smriks* ahhh ok umm *think think think!* heh randomness w/ sugaru and hiro again lol but it's fun..randomness is good, hell that's what icaf is about, randomness ^_____^ the lil show ryu put on, oh yeah baby, how kawaii was that? lol and shuu talkin to kuma-kun??!?! *laughs* ohhh soo fun! nice lemon babe...keep em comin!! so, all in all...i love you i love your fics and i love you. so get over it ^__~ *scrunches nose* there was more i'm sure that i wanted to say, but...yeah maragaritas are hitting me good now haaaha *cough* wow why do you get sleepy from drinking? no good! my turn to write!!!! lol gah ah well, as long as you and crys put out the fics then that's good... hehe ok i'm gonna go now before i keep on ramblin even though i've done done that now *cracks up* boobs and bear dood boobs and bear! *hugs and cuddles and kisses and much much more ^__~*
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  • From ANON - Houseki on October 22, 2005
    Ohhh yes, another great chappy from my favortie Ren!! *huggles mah girl* Lemony goodness...must love! Ah! Bad bad BAD Touma!! He put Ryuichi up to all this! Shame on him! The bastard! Yuki misses shuuuuuuuu *awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww* Even though I hate cliche'd endings, I still want you and me to get back together babe...the music is much more sweeter when it's the two of us *giggles* Can't wait to read the next one! Hop to it! Your mistress says so!

    *hugs and kisses*

    Nic
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  • From ANON - swyen on October 21, 2005
    i absolutely love it! wonderful, spec-fucking-tacular, please continue :)
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