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Reviews for Misty\'s Surprise

By : lornder
  • From on July 19, 2007
    YES a threesome without 2 dudes
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  • From Lyfe on June 27, 2007
    Please refrain from Internet slang; it like someone said, makes the story dull and not worth reading. Otherwise, the lemon was good. Please rewrite it and make it not in script format. Make it a story format after all, it's story we're looking for, not movies.
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  • From ANON - bloodrain01 on December 26, 2006
    are u going to do a part two
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  • From ANON - Hot Charizard on January 07, 2006
    it was a good idea, an oral threesome with Ash, Joy, and Misty in the forest...nicely done on selecting the scenario and all but why did you have it in script format and have little to no adjectives? It wasn't very arousing because this was in script format and because your adjectives were absent and things went too fast and straightforward.

    Nice try and nice scenario but wrong format, descriptions, and flow...

    sorry, but keep trying
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  • From ANON - Sean on December 28, 2005
    Internet slang makes for subpar stories.
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