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By : Lunarian

From LordPatamon on May 11, 2007
And here I was thinking you abandoned this series, I haven't seen you around not even in the forum in a while my friend, I'm glad you're still around, though this chapter 11 I saw it already time ago but still is really so good ^^

Keep up the good work and glad to see you still around :)
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From ANON - Neccor on November 07, 2005
Great story, I'll defintally be keeping an eye out for this. Keep up the good work.
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From ANON - Blackrose on November 05, 2005
Another great chapter. Man hope my faves won't change too much. Lol. Man that's freaky that they're gonna be one and the same with their Digimon. Will the kids be able to use their Digimons attacks? Update soon. Looking forward to the next part.
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From ANON - Blackrose on October 29, 2005
This is getting good. Man that sounds typical of Matt. Can't get depressed, so gets drunk. You got him down good there. Poor Tai. He always seems to suffer coz of his Sister. Hope to see more up soon.
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From ANON - Lord Pata on October 28, 2005
Well I already read this chapter at ff.net and the uncut version at DHZ and I really loved it, you sure are good at writing sex scenes, and even though TK and Kari are becoming one in the same with Pata and Gato I still like to see my two fav couples so deep in this, the profecy sure is great too, this sure is a great fic. :)
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From ANON - Blackrose on October 25, 2005
Woah, cool prophecy. You're really good at that. Man that's so typical of Izzy. I thought he learnt his lesson in the Digiworld to get all teh facts together before making stupid decisions. Hope he gets the worst deal. Sora too coz I flat out hate her. Update soon please.
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From ANON - Blackrose on October 20, 2005
AH!! My poor virgin eyes. Lol. Great chapter, though still uncomfortable with the pairing, but hey, that doesn't matter. I love your style of writing. It's really good. For your first sex scene, that was really good too. All in all great chapter.
Please warn me about the chapters that have the dire fate of Tai, Matt, Davis, Yolei and Ken. Oh Joe Mimi too. Coz I don't think they deserve it. the rest of them I couldn't give a toss about. Hope to see more soon.
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From ANON - Blackrose on October 18, 2005
Oh no. I hope they don't hurt the rest of the Digidestined. They don't deserve it as they've done nothing wrong. Hope TK and Kari pay for this betrayal. This is a good story. Very creepy. Daemon gives me the creeps. Lol. Couldn't u have chosen someone else? Lol. Just kidding, although not about giving me the creeps bit. Hope to see more soon.
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From ANON - Lord Pata on October 17, 2005
The things sure are getting interesting, Daemon sure knew how to convince them, the plot is getting interesting, the others sure gonna be in for a surprise in later chapters.

Another thing is that sure sure have talent to write the sex scenes, mostly since you know how to add them to the main plot of the story. A great job my friend :)

About the Dance scene of Pata and Gato on season 2 it was on the episode Davis Cries Wolfmon if I recall well I think it was the episode 22 I'm not sure mostly since the names of the episodes in the spanish dub are totally diferent from the ones used in the USA dub.

Well gotta go for now, keep up the good work my friend :)
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From ANON - Blackrose on October 15, 2005
Just gotta add, that LordPata is a loyal reviewer. Also, I really liked the way you displayed Patamon and Gatomon after they were interrupted. *Giggles.* Fur ruffled and all that. Anyways keep up your great writing. You're a natural.
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From ANON - Blackrose on October 15, 2005
I gotta say you are one of the quickest writers I've met. Lol. I'm glad though. Even though I don't like the pairing I can see you are dedicated to your reviewers. I'm impressed. Like I said, even though I don't like the pairing, I do like action and cliffies and such and am extremely curious as to what happens next. Will they really die? And by the way, who has Davis got his eye on? You mentioned it in the first chapter. Hope to see him happy. I meant what I said. You are a good writer and you've catured their personalities really well. Glad Kari won't be seen as perfect. She isn't my fave character. In fact I positively hate Kari and Sora. TK and Davis, along with Tai and Matt are my faves. Well, said all I want to. Hope to see more. Keep it up.
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From ANON - Lord Pata on October 15, 2005
Yeah I noticed how TK and Kari have thoughts as if they were Patamon and Gatomon respectively, like in the chapter 4 when TK wanted to get rid of that digimon who attacked them for interrupt his fun......... with Gatomon. well he thought that, I mean he was thinking like if he was Patamon.

Is really interesting, I mean the way how TK and Kari are linked to Patamon and Gatomon in your fic is getting deeper than they thought at the point the humans have dreams like if they were their digimon, like TK dreaming that he was Patamon and was sharing an ice cream with Gatomon.

About what you said about TK/Pata and Kari/Gato being the same entities, it's okay, it wouldn't detract of the idea of them being still Gatomon and Patamon, I like them together in all ways, names and form and as individual as well. You see, for me those two always had look good together, out of your fic and going in their interaction on season 2 Gatomon and Patamon showed a close interaction, I really don't like them because of their crests linked or because TK and Kari are close friends, I simply like them because they are cute together.

But unfortunately in the lemon department, most authors pair Gatomon with digimon like Veemon, Agumon, Gabumon, Gomamon or Hawkmon. I noticed that most authors don't see Pata as a digimon that can be on a romantic relation let alone on a intimate (sex) relation, but I think the oposite, Patamon has a lot of potential too, sure he is smaller and childish but hey, Guilmon is even childish than Patamon and I had seen a lot of Renamon/Guilmon lemons. If you ask me the pairing Renamon/Guilmon kinda reminds me of PataGato, I mean she is the tough digimon born as natural fighter while he is the innocent shy digimon but that can fight when is necesary.

Patamon, in a sort of way managed to help Gatomon to re-find that innocense she lost due to her working with Myotismon and also due to all the time she spent searching for Kari alone, just remember the episode Davis Cries Wolfmon, Gatomon, Patamon and DemiVeemon were watching Kari on her dancing class, and quoting the spanish dub here in Mexico which by the way isn't based off the USA dub but a loyal translation of the original script when they were watching Kari dancing Gatomon said "I want to dance too" and Patamon told her "Then why we don't dance?" then they started to dance and laugh. My point here is that in a sort of way Pata is that key to make Gatomon forget her toughness a bit and being more playfull but then again is just an opinion.

Talking about the USA dub it was that dub what made Patamon look more childish than he already is, if you compare the USA dub with the Spanish dub from Mexico you gonna see a huge lot of diferences.

Anyhow returning to your fic, I really don't mind TK and Pata as well Kari and Gato being the same entities, I like both pairings both are my top faves :)

So keep up the good work my friend and if you later can write another PataGato fic after you finish this one or when you have a chance, that would be good, I really like your writing style :)
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From ANON - Lord Pata on October 14, 2005
I understand my friend, but hey, for someone that doesn't have Takari and PataGato on their top favorite pairings you're doing a pretty good job I really liked the PataGato part on your version at ff.net but well Sonimon at DHZ still doesn't update his site to see the uncut version but meh, I can wait :)

Also I know that there are a lot of Takari out there but on the PataGato department the things are very, very low, mostly on the lemon department, there isn't much lemons with them not even on their angel forms, so when I saw this story of yours, it made me glad to see another PataGato mature material to read :)

Well, keep it up and keep up the good work :)
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From ANON - Lord Pata on October 14, 2005
I already reviewed your fic at ff.net, but I'm gonna review it here too, is pretty interesting the plot, after all there aren't much fics with this kind of plot.

and to Blackrose. I respect you like Daikari but you don't have to flame fics that use Kari paired with TK or another character, an author is free to use the couple he or she considers that fits to the plot of the story he or she is planning so stop complaining about that Lunarian used the wrong pairing.

To Lunarian again.

I really don't know if Takari and PataGato are on your favorite pairings since you didn't mentioned them on your profile at ff.net but I like the fact that you centered this story on those two pairings, mostly that you added PataGato, is really hard find PataGato fics above the PG-13 rating with good plotlines, I can tell that at least TK is one of your favorite characters since you like pair him with any of the other girls of season 1 and 2.

I'm well aware that in this story both pairings might not remain together by the end of your fic but at least I'm happy to see that you gave them more action and with an interesting twist.

Keep up the good work, oh and sorry about my review on your version at ff.net, I realized that it was really lame, is just that I was so happy to see a PataGato material that I overreacted on my happiness :P

Keep it up man and don't let the flamers let you down. :)
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From ANON - Blackrose on October 14, 2005
*Gags.* Good timig evil person. Can this fic get any sappier. Kari is nowhere near perfect and she has the flattest chest I have ever seen. I am so sick of seeing these crap fics with little innocent Kawi, when she is NOT innocent. she's a little whore. I hope you, as a writer, write something better.
You're a good writer, but you've got the wrong pairing. Please don't turn out like those other idiot writers.
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