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Reviews for Neutrals and Seishi

By : shanirah
  • From ANON - KittyLynne on October 20, 2005
    Saw this was posted on ff.net as well, but as I've already started reviewing it here, I thought I'd continue. ^_^

    First offl, in regards to the pairing warning, I wanted to make sure to tell you that just because I prefer writing and reading the Tasuki x Miaka pairing, doesn't mean I won't and/or don't read Tasuki x Chiri fics. ^_^ I really like how you portray them . You keep them in character, which I greatly appreciate . You also write them as being *both* good friends and lovers, an aspect that I think is very crucial to present (and keep) in order to make them into a credible pairing. (It also adds a great deal of warmth to the romance. )

    Kaiya has made friends easily; she's obviously impressed people with her intelligence and unique look. I got a kick out of Kouji's comment about sticking around her so that some of her 'smarts' will rub off on him. *lol* That seems very Kouji-like...and btw, many, many kudos for including him! (Yay! He's one of my favorites, and I think he's a woefully y underappreciated character.) Ayame and Hotohori...so alike, and yet so different- I think writing those two plus Nuriko would be a riot! It was also very interesting that Chichiri could sense the 'Sohma' vibe in Kaiya...he's a lot like Hana in that sense. Now that the initial character introductions are done, I'm wondering what kind of conflict is going to arise...keep going!

    every good wish,
    KittyLynne




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  • From ANON - Rae on October 19, 2005
    This is awesome! ^-^ I actually started reading it on fanfiction.net and then saw it here and was like -gasp!- Please update soon. I'm really enjoying this.
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  • From ANON - KittyLynne on October 12, 2005
    This story is a *very* interesting idea, both from the 'Zodiac neutral' standpoint, and the idea of crossing FY with FB. Kaiya is a very likeable OC because you've made her into a very realistic young woman. I look forward to seeing where you take this!

    KittyLynne
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