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Reviews for For Friendship, perhaps

By : Larania
  • From Klepto on February 26, 2009
    Whoo! I must say that this is pretty good stuff you got here. XD
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  • From Tsukisa on January 11, 2008
    Just so you know, I've never had an account on here before. But this story made me actually want to go and create an account just so I could review it. I don't think I've ever read a story- let alone one that was smut-based and had no real adventure/plot or anything- that made me want to do that.

    So, basically what I'm saying is that this story is good. I mean reaaaally good. And I've read a lot of stories- lot of smut stories, I'll admit. Hey, I've got needs! But this story... I mean, I was still blushing and going 'Whoo!' the next day! I remembered a scene from it while was at work and my manager asked if I needed to sit down. She said my face was all red and that I looked feverish ^^;;; There's never been a smut story that did that to me before. So I officially rank this, "The hottest story I have ever read, ever" ^_^v

    You did perfectly with the reasoning on why Syaoran had to be the one. Most authors seem to just pick two characters and claim they always secretly loved each other. You even managed to keep the canon intact- enforced it even- while doing the hottest sex in a non-canon pairing I've ever seen. On top of that, I loved your progression from pure lust to actual emotions. It came through very well.

    Anyway, that's about all I can say. Keep writing ^_~


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  • From AurthorsDeath on January 10, 2008
    oooooooooooooooooooo!!!!! This was reallllly good!!!!!!!!!! Please make it into a mini series!
    Thank you!
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  • From BlackRoseElise on December 28, 2007
    jfskdhafasjd! So good! Generally the idea of Syaoran/Kuro squicks me but ohhhh myyyy gooood this was amazing. And I was able to ignore the KuroFai angst until the very end and then my brain turned to keyboard mash. I wanna know what happens~! -pleads- Please update soon!
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  • From bloodstone on October 07, 2007
    oO? Are you actully going to contoule? If so I am very intreasted in see where your going to tack this. Please email me if you do. AngelicChaos81@yahoo.com
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  • From lovelesslybeloved on October 02, 2007
    ok, i know i am asking a ridiculous requests for a yaoi writer, but maybe from the first chapter you could maybe write a fai/sakura pairing.....im sorry that is my favorite straight couple in this one but i would have to say that fai/kuro-tan is my favorite yaoi! so please oh please write a fai/sakura?!
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  • From sodapop0006 on September 03, 2007
    This is so adorable! I love how you've stuck with the character's personalities, even as non-canon I find it completely believable. You have a real gift with words. I was especially fond of the way Kurogane saw Syaoran as a wolf cub, with "his legs and paws too big for his body". That is exactly how Syaoran acts with his determination. :D I am so glad that I came across this fic. It wasn't a pair that I would think of initially, but I think that it has a lot of potential in that sexy mentor-student kind of way. Best of luck in all you pursue!
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  • From edbeale on June 03, 2007
    This story is fabulous. I really, REALLY hope you consider continuing this piece some time soon.
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  • From ANON - kinmik on January 03, 2007
    thank you~! you updated! i just love your way with words, you make them flow so smoothly and it just makes the story so right. rabyuuuu~!
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  • From ANON - german_nemesis on December 18, 2006
    Yeah, a new chapter. I am so happy! It's an usual couple, but it's well done and I simply love it. Please do continue!!
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  • From ANON - Foenix on November 27, 2006
    Gaaaah!
    So good.
    Really, for being such a crack pairing you pulled it off really well, better than alot of others that write the crackless stuff.
    Anyways... you totally need to make this into a series. Oh, the angst of it.
    And then you could do a threesome with K/S/F.
    That could be so hot. ^__^

    And let me just stress that it was really really really REALLY well done.
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  • From ANON - anonymous reader on October 15, 2006
    Oh my god!!! KuroganeXSyaoran FOR THE WIN!!! XD
    What a wonderfully amusing pairing. I love your story idea so MUCH. Your lemons are extremely impressive and amazing. Love the whole plot, really, a LOT. The writing style makes details and illustrations more perceivable which enhances the story with fabulous color and emotion. Gah, I want more!!! Get writing! ;P Good luck with continuing this fiction. UPDATE SOON! Please. ^-^
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  • From ANON - wizard_rabbit on September 17, 2006
    This is (sadly) the only KuroxSyao story I've ever read but I'm glad it's so well written! Kudos to you! Please make it into a series. I'm wondering how far deeper they'll get into their relationship.
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  • From ANON - jeza_red on September 09, 2006
    Oh my God, this ff is just sooo great! The way you're describing their feelings, something that's not there yet, but tries to be... Syaoran confusion is just heart wrenching, and the way you made Kurogane - a teacher, a good friend, a one mature person in this traumateamXD It's just precious! I want to know what will happen - part of my wants to see Kuro with Fei (God, let him keep that white dumbass from running again, pleaseXD) but a part of me screams "Screw Fei, forget Sakura, go for the kid, Kuro-chan!" ... I'm so bad, I know, that's a trait in my family-___-
    So, are you planning to write another part or leave me with head trauma? I advise you to write another part - you're good at it and this story has a big potential!
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  • From ANON - Someone149 on September 03, 2006
    Great story, I loved it haha :D I really hope you update soon, can't wait for it :D
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