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Reviews for A Momentary Lapse

By : jelmling
  • From ANON - Riva on July 15, 2012
    This was such a great story, you really captured the moments perfectly in well written manners. The love scene between them was beautiful. Doris and D are my favorite pairing. Is the Doris in your story based off of her character in the book/manga? Great job once again.
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  • From cmill124 on November 17, 2010
    *applauds* Wow, that was just, I can't help but to leave a review. That was phenomenally well written. Normally I don't enjoy erotic writing without careful application of euphemisms for the naughty bits, the clinical words "clitoris", "vulva", etc, they always seemed to dull some of the passion if not completely drown it, but I don't know, somehow the way you've written here is remarkably effective. I'm sorry to say I've only seen Bloodlust, and read a few pieces of D literature so I'm not terribly familiar with Doris or her story, but it seems to me the characters are as well written as the sex and the story leading up. On the whole, it has a very complete feeling, like an appropriate ending to something wonderful that simply could not last. I feel a bit sorry for Dan though, he'll never get to say goodbye.
    Bravo to you on this wonderfully well written tell.
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  • From ANON - Steve on October 05, 2006
    I am a big fan of VHD, movies and novels, and I like this a lot. It incorporates details from the story (veeeeeery nice touch with Doris's father's sword - that was cool), nice imagry (no, not just the smutty parts), and ends well - with D still himself, Doris with her chaste, now not so chaste, love, yet somehow they even fit together well. happy ending. Neat, clean, and well written.

    And, because it really was, the sex scene was gratuitous, well written, and tasteful. 10 out of 10, if they rated that way, but as it is... +++++!
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  • From ANON - dasie e wolf on June 29, 2006
    i though this was a sonderful story. and it's not all sex eventhough that was good too. lol.
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  • From ANON - Big Samurai on October 22, 2005
    It has been my privilege to beta this 'fic. You already know my thoughts on it, but I am going to repeat them for other readers.

    Why do I like this story? There are a few good reasons. 1.) It focuses on the original VHD, rather than Bloodlust. (Nothing against Bloodlust, but VHD was a landmark for anime outside Japan, and it deserves more attention than it currently gets.) 2. It is true to the characters that it presents, particularly D. It is not easy to keep D in-character, but, in this story, he is almost perfect, down to the banter between him and Left Hand. 3. It is a perfectly logical continuation of the story that it affects. I can easily visualize it happening after the credits roll on the original film.

    That being said, this is a great piece, and I highly recommend it to VHD fans. ... You have said that you are rusty, Talia-san, but this story does not seem rusty to me. Welcome back to 'fic! If all of your upcoming pieces are as good as this one, you have absolutely nothing to fear. Let me know if you need a beta again. :-)
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  • From ANON - Sea-EnigmaDare on October 18, 2005
    Nice one and I really enjoyed it as it was well written.
    Good job and keep it up :) .
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