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Reviews for Term Paper Turmoil

By : SkittleSama
  • From ANON - O____O on July 16, 2006
    Nice story. Continue with it and i'll grant you three wishes *that will undoubtable not come true*
    Rockin sex scenes had me fanning myself off.
    Keep up the good Work babe.
    Ciao!
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  • From ANON - review lord on July 06, 2006
    its obvious that mimi wants izzy so she must break them up, am I right, or for the next chapter they could always play the jealousy game, izzy takes mimi to make YOLIE jealous, you could always take that route, continue soon
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  • From ANON - review lord on July 06, 2006
    MIMIs such a liar, you CAN TELL, please update soon
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  • From ANON - Rienna on January 25, 2006
    Hey, liked the whole backstabbing/intrigue thing you've got going on this chapter--evil place to end though. What the heck with not writing me to tell me you posted? I'm sorry things have been hectic for you. Hope to hear from you soon, and hope to read your next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - GoggleBoy on November 26, 2005
    Truly awesome. Far too many half-assed stories around here. Nice to see something so well done.
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  • From ANON - Master Of The Poke World on November 26, 2005
    I loved this chapter (2)...U gonna continue right???

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  • From ANON - TaichiKoi on November 22, 2005
    I'm not a huge fan of I/Y, but I'm seriously liking this story! I really hope you continue it, it holds much promise, I can already tell. And that sex scene was HOT, I didn't know Yolei could be so kinky, heh. Hope you write more. b^^
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  • From ANON - Rienna on November 19, 2005
    Hey, I just got back from a mini-trip and here's a new chapter waiting for me. I loved it. She was adorable and the mouse thing was pretty hot. One thing though--after she told him that she was on the pill, did he take the condom off or did he fuck her with it anyway? Let me know when the next chapter is up, this is a fun project.
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  • From ANON - HeAvEnLY_BLiSS on November 17, 2005
    Oh, it was wonderful! Keep up the great work! *_* I had stars in my eyes the WHOLE time!
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  • From ANON - BlueVixen2071 on November 16, 2005
    Heeheeheeee...awesome! ^^ lol That whole 'prodigious' thing was cute, haha. =-P It was also interesting that Izzy's favorite hardware was involved in the sexual encounter, giving it a five out of five rating! Way to go...can't wait for more! ^,~
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  • From ANON - Milly on November 03, 2005
    Your build-up is very, utterly kickass. The mixing of what one presents and what one does when it comes to HAWTNESS was damn good too. AND VIDEO GAME PR0N YAYZ

    Fic rocked, character description especially awesome. Await next chapter so I can UNF UNF UNF
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  • From ANON - HeAvEnLy BLiSS on November 02, 2005
    Oooh, PLEASE hurry and continue! ^_^ It's wonderfully-written and the scenario's so ridiculous that it makes sense! =-P haha That's great---never would've thought of THAT, but it's still great. Please, though, for all that is holy, continue! Although I never would've thought of the 2 as a pair, I like Izzy and feel that his character doesn't get enough attention, so please hurry! ^,~
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2005
    Good start. Exponential buildup -- slow at first, gets faster as it proceeds until it's climbing faster than the reader keeps up; this is good for eliciting excitement. A little confusing between the first scene shift; has time changed? We know it has, but I had to reread it. Maybe just a little (earlier) by the ***. Should be interesting to see where this goes. I think you'll have to cool it back off quite a bit unless the story ends up being only a little longer than chapter 1 en masse. Is this what the manga morphed into, or is that an entirely seperate project? I'd have to assume yes, as they are so similar. Very nice start. You're most eloquent with your words, unsurprising for skittlesama, but I cringed a few times at the technical details. I'll rub that off as the offense I take when I hear other real technicians doing support, and so receive it well that Izzy has rubbed my fur the wrong way with his technical advisories.
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  • From ANON - Master Of the Poke World on November 02, 2005
    Nice story.
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  • From ANON - Master Of the Poke World on November 02, 2005
    Nice story.
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