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Reviews for Shadows of the mind

By : Queerbee
  • From ANON - the later chapters are lacking update now and suck less on July 03, 2006
    read the name its hard 2 do this on a psp
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on January 14, 2006
    Okay, just to say it, it's either Rini or Chibi-Usa, not both. Please make up your mind and use either her "English" name or her iriginal Japanese one. Thank you. Otherwise, nice one! Mina gone evil, wouldn't have seen that one coming. Can't wait for the next chapter! Laters!
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  • From ANON - shinra on January 14, 2006
    kick ass that was a great chapter you need to keep going hope you update soon. hurry up and update the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on January 04, 2006
    I understand completely. I wasn't exactly active for round about a week when I had my appendix out(in the neighborhood of ten years ago...), so I know how it goes. Just take your time and update when you actually can! Laters!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on January 04, 2006
    Actually, this is more like "A Nightmare On Elm Street" than "Friday The 13th". But be that as it may, I'm guessing Rini is this tale is about 10 or less. No matter, as you say, now it's getting interesting. Now "They" are goin after Ames! Okay, next chapter!!
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  • From Aninzu on December 24, 2005
    Take your time. I know how that goes with surgeries. Just get it up when you can. I'm really interested in seeing what will happen.
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  • From ANON - blackdestiny on December 11, 2005
    hell ya this was a great chapter you have to update soon so that I can read it so don't take to long. great story kept going.
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  • From ANON - Cheesypuff on December 11, 2005
    what that was it I want more damn it and you better not take 2 fucking weeks to update again I like this story please continue.
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  • From ANON - Blackrosephantom on December 11, 2005
    O_O Whoa...
    Yes, things are getting interesting. Please fix your grammar errors. Ex~ Hotaru is in the library with herself? Amy put on a rob? Etc. Thats ok. We all make mistakes. What counts is that you have amazing writing talent.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 27, 2005
    Incredible work I am truly impressed. A damn good story line that dosnt rely on childish smut. keep it up
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  • From ANON - Blueblazer (Not log in) on November 25, 2005
    This story getting a little creepy by each chapter
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  • From ANON - blackdestiny on November 25, 2005
    Hell ya you have got to update soon we want to find out what happen. please continue with this story and hurry update soon. What is Ami huh huh??
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  • From ANON - cheesypuff on November 25, 2005
    Great story you need to hurry and update. I want some cheesypuff. well anyways please continue and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on November 25, 2005
    Interesting use of her healing powers. I noticed, though, that you made a few tiny mistakes, such as "She's in the the library with Hotaru,", when you clearly meant to write, "She's in the library with Michiru.". Well, I look forward to the next entry. Laters!
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  • From ANON - An enthusiatic writter on November 23, 2005
    I am a writter on this website as well. The punctuations a lil messed up but its some good stuff. You have the ominous appeal that people such as myself stride for. Keep it up.
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