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Reviews for Just Desserts

By : DevilnBlue
  • From ANON - Hitomi on December 13, 2010
    It was so good! Please continue it!
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  • From ANON - RHP on December 13, 2009
    UPDATE. CHAPTER 3. NOW. LOOK! I'M REVIEWING! SO WRITE MOREEEEEE
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  • From Darkwolf01 on February 24, 2008
    Ok, well first of all this is a good start to the story. I have really enjoyed the chapters that you've written so far, and i do hope you write more, as i absoultely love Tsume's character.

    Second, please don't have the attitude you have now towards writing. You should write the story for you, not for the reviews. Don't get me wrong, i like reviews, especially if they give positive or constructive criticism. It's a great feeling to know someone out there appreciates your work. And i do hope you gain the courage to write more, you'd be surprised at how many other authors don't know what they're doing and then demand reviews or else they won't continue. Just keep writing for yourself most of all, and take in all the good vibes from any review, even if they are not flowing in at a hundred reviews a minute. :)

    Thanks for writing and i hope you continue.

    Wolfsoul
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 25, 2007
    PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER IT IS REALLY GOOD PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2007
    It is really good please put up the next chapter
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  • From ANON - wolfwitch on December 14, 2006
    keep it up. its going good. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Rider on October 14, 2006
    Hey! you got your reviews!! Update soon!! please...
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  • From ANON - Lexie on September 01, 2006
    Please oh please continue! This has to be one of the best fanfics I've read in a while! I'm looking forward to it's continuation

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  • From ANON - Lady Sin on August 10, 2006
    Hello there.
    I was reading your story and i am very intrested in reading more. A bit of advice, when your writing, avoid repeating the same word twice in the same two sentances. And dont rush it, because you manage to forget a lot of connecting words such as 'of, and, if, but'

    I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

    Sincerely
    Lady Sin
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  • From ANON - TK on August 06, 2006
    woo - love where this is going so far. So this first time is a mistake... but we haven't even gotten to that yet! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - -X- on July 24, 2006
    too lazy to log in.


    This was such a cool pairing

    ;~; keep going!! I NEED TO KNOW THE REST ><

    I hate that you just left it there DAMN PEOPLE REVIEW GOOD STORIES NOW!!! o well im reviewing.

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  • From ANON - SassieLassie11988 on July 10, 2006
    Hey, that was really good! Do you think you could possibly do a Blue/Kiba one?? XD I have yet to see one, and I think the alpha male deserves some M/F action for a change! lol
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  • From ANON - Koto-san on July 06, 2006
    UPDATE ONEAGIII~!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2006
    Glad to see an update. Tsume's a hottie and I'm always glad to get a bit of action from him. :)
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  • From ANON - Rider on June 28, 2006
    God, I will give you hundret reviews! Just update the damn story..soon. It's great ;)
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