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Reviews for Non Compos Mentis

By : rAiNwAtEr
  • From ANON - kuroi yoru on December 16, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!! This is really good I was a little hesitant to read since it's a Kyo/Akito but it's very good. You have a very good writing style and there was no major spelling mistakes that I could see. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - X on September 15, 2006
    Love the story. Keep up the good work. I'm dieing to read the rest.
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Annette on September 12, 2006
    I like this! It is cool! Akito's in love w/ Kyo!! I love stories like this! Unfortunately, their aren't enough!!! Please continue writing this!!!
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  • From ANON - Lizzy*D on August 11, 2006
    this story is starting to get really good. Sorry, I should be reviewing for you, but I've been busy in the Inuyasha section. But I've enjoyed your other stories as well. Please continue, if only for me.
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  • From ANON - Megan on June 25, 2006
    I love this story. I haven't seen a lot of AkitoxKyo pairings, and you have managed to pull it off very well. It's nice to see Akito for once as not being portrayed as a one-sided sadist, the way he seems to be in most stories. I think you've really given him some depth to his character.

    Out of curiousity, I noticed that you also have this story published on Fanfiction.net, and that it actually has a fifth chapter there. Do you plan on uploading that chapter here as well? I'd love to be able to read it here as well, as I don't go on FF.Net very often.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2006
    I love it!!!!! Akito's so awesome! *high pitch fangirl squeal* HI-5!!!!! *virtually hi-5's you*

    Huzzah! You must write moooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on January 25, 2006
    I really like this idea. There aren't that many stories out there that view Akito in even a semi-not psychotic light. And him wanting Kyo, that's a really good idea.
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  • From ANON - nay on January 07, 2006
    honestly i have never read a better kyo/akito pic. i dunno, i'm just really stubborn and want to believe that akito is male, but i'm sure, so i'll stop yelling at my computer and apologize for irrational behavior. I only read up to the 12th volume of the mangas, and i'm all american, *actually half german half american, so call me a german american* but so i'll just get over my little bitch fit. i just want to say that i like this story very much. for the first time there is no depressing or heartrbreaking scenes at the moment. I read some other stories and i felt like putting a gun to my head and pulling the trigger *i'm that kind of person that gets easily influenced by other's emotions* but for once there a bit of happiness, it's not like joyous elation, but it makes a small smile quirk at the corners of my mouth. I used to hate akito with all my might, but then i watched the series and i began to show some compassion for him. now I adore him. first he's completely beautiful, and secondly i just like his hostility, because that reminds me of myself when i'm P.M.S.ing! *i do throw things, you can ask my sister* hear i go rambling and you must be thinking, who the hell is this annoying twat? okay, i love your story, and i would cry if you never finished it. your story has changed my day, before i was a depressed blob, and now i feel relaxed and collected. thank you.

    nay (it pisses me off that they have the email addresses hidden, so just for the hell of it flyinggoldfish_8@hotmail.com)
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  • From ANON - nay on January 07, 2006
    NO!!! I like this story. I hope this makes you feel better, because i am very transfixed and eager to read more. do write more, and to give you some comfort, there is someone out there that will be taking in every worthy moment of reading your story. just want to make you feel better

    nay
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  • From ANON - ariana on December 15, 2005
    Your story is turning out really well. I like Akito's character, and I'm glad that at least one person doesn't see him as a purely sadistic bastard. I can't wait for you to update
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  • From ANON - Angela on November 29, 2005
    i love it. i love that you had akito have at least some humanity. i hate it when people write about him as if he were a monster. write more soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From evilfairy on November 28, 2005
    Much better but something I forgot to mention, Sohma, not Shoma, (I looked it up, Shoma isn't even a Japanese word). But the Spelling and grammer are much better. A word from one auther to another, all good writers reread thier work because it's better if you catch the mistakes before other people do.

    -Talia

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  • From ANON - noone on November 28, 2005
    Wow...just, wow...how's Akito going to last against the charm of the cat? (despite being the outcast, kyo is my fav. character). Hope you update soon! baibai!
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  • From ANON - ae-ran on November 23, 2005
    what? nooooo! do keep writing!! I'm a fan of Akito/Kyo! I like how this starts out more realistically, with Kyo hating Akito-- and you made a good point with how both Akito and Kyo are isolated from the Sohma family -- So please do keep writing... I want to see how Akito finally gets Kyo...!
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  • From ANON - Talia on November 22, 2005
    PS. I made a mistake, it's shogi, not shoji. Gomen nasai. Oh, yeah, if you're basing this off the manga, Akito's a girl.
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