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Reviews for Summer\'s Passion

By : Hudson
  • From ANON - Anon on June 22, 2010
    great story until the ending. trite, very trite.
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  • From JohnMadden on September 01, 2009
    NOOOOOO damnit you cant fucking walk away from this story, not when it has so much going for it.
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  • From Shywanderer043 on September 17, 2008
    Are you going to be making a chapter two or no?
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  • From juanjoseso on April 13, 2008
    that was a hot start can't wait for more
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  • From LunaAddictus on April 09, 2008
    Very nice! An excellent KeitaroShinobu fic.
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  • From ANON - Kori on September 07, 2006
    That was a wonderful fic- absolutely perfect. A blend of good writing and a hot scene, you really know what you're doing here! Many of the authors here could learn a lot from you. I'll look forward to more by this author!
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  • From ANON - fanficfan on July 29, 2006
    where to start? where to start? Okay. First of all, I would like you to know that I did enjoy the plot; I love it when Shinobu gets Keitaro because it rarely happens. However, your grammar and literacy are amateur at best. One thing that pissed me off in this fic is that you referred to the "morning-after pill" as the "after the morning pill." Come on, man, at least command a little bit of knowledge about your subject matter. Next, your wording seemed redundant. It seemed like you were taking a stab in the dark with your wording because you really made it uncomfortable to read. I do like it when people use metaphors instead of absolutly out of character words. For example, if it were a Motoko/Keitaro story, and the author made a Motoko dialogue saying "Oh...I love the way his cock feels in my throbbing pussy" then I would immediatly discontinue reading the story because it's bullshit. It is completely out of character for Motoko to say "cock" much less refer to her own vagina as a "throbbing pussy." Just try to stay in character and all will be fine. Now, I hear fellow critics say that virgins cannot create good romance fiction, simply because they have not truly experienced sex and cannot accurately describe it. To me, that statement is complete bullshit as one of my closest friends is a virgin and writes the most kick ass Neon Genesis fics. that I have ever read. From personal experience, I would have to say that anything felt during sex can be described accurately with enough research by means of arrogant friends. Sex is overrated anyway. Guys will throw away every last ounce of dignity they possess for any chance for some tail. So anyway, I saw that this is your first fic. and it was a great effort. Just keep up the work and it will come to you one day. My first fic. got flamed for weeks because it sucked so bad but I got great at it. Anyway, I'm going to watch The Boondocks so ... I'm out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2006
    damn... I have trouble believing that was your fist lemon. you must have read a lot of others before writing this then, coz this is fuckingawesome!! I can't even stand up!! Great job--make every lemon JUST LIKE THAT. And brilliant touch with the Space Shuttle discovery, that just made is SO Love Hina. Great job over all.
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  • From ANON - BZ on January 05, 2006
    nice job Bigfics and I saw it on fanfiction too and I like it.
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  • From ANON - tomdj1701 on January 05, 2006
    Good story. I also recall this one from FFnet. As for a 1st lemon it is a good one. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Blue on December 18, 2005
    That's a really good story... hehe... i read over a bunch of times... keep up the good work...
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  • From BrianChattillon on November 17, 2005
    Damn that was pretty hot.
    as long as the story codes are correct Banning is not possible.

    A rather interesting first chapter indeed!
    I wait for more with wrapt attentions!

    BrianDarksoul(Evil Psychotic Australian Bastard!)
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  • From ANON - RAW19 on November 17, 2005
    i too remember this from FF.Net, and was very angry when it was removed. It remains one of my favorite Love Hina stories, to date. for a first lemon it was very well done, detailed, and drawn out. The emotions seemed very real and probable. i hope you write more stories like this in the future, or update this one!
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  • From on November 16, 2005
    I remember reading this on FFNet. Looks like nothing changed here.

    You know, now that you have this fic here in AdutlFan, you don't need that part in your author's note anymore. The one that says you hope not to get banned. You could have had that taken off, or maybe you just forgot.

    Anyway, I still liked this a lot! I hope you can post more lemons here. See you soon!
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