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Reviews for Wicked Games

By : breathlessnight
  • From ANON - Anonymous on February 05, 2006
    OMG! THAT WAS JUST SO COOL! SO HOT!
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  • From ANON - SplitPersona on November 17, 2005
    OH MY... HYOGA!!!! HYOGA!!!! HYOGA!!!!

    Okay, I think I have found a kindred spirit. You took my insecure, relationship-shy swan and turned him into a shy, need-to-please SEX SLAVE!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

    Everyone usually makes him dominant and somewhat gruff. All the gruffness in the anime and manga is an act because of him being an Ice Saint. His own teachers say he cares too much. He's afraid of relationships because the people he loves tend to die, usually by way of him killing them. But when he does give in, he gives his all to the person he commits to whether it be in complete loyalty, friendship, or intimate love. And you made him so willing to please Shun... It was wonderful. And then you made the ultimate cameo...REN AND STIMPY!!!

    You took three of my all time favorite Saint Seiya characters and put them in an orgy. Then you threw in Seiya and made it better. Wicked wasn't even the word. It would be interesting to see a sequel to this about the four continuing with their foursome escapades, only to have Hyoga constantly conflicting with his need to please Shun and his discomfort with what they're doing. It seemed like a recurring point in the story. He didn't like being with other people besides Shun, even though his body wanted it. Very interesting. The only thing that would have made this story my personal dream come true would have been adding Aquarius Camus to the mix.

    Now, on the grammatical and dictional aspecs of the story, I don't think you did too bad. Spelling was okay, but maybe you should have a beta or something look it over for little things. Like I think you forgot to make some things plural once or twice. Other than that, I think it was a wonderful Uke!Hyoga fic, which I just happen to adore. Too bad that there aren't enough people who agree with me. I would do anything for more of these types of stories. Not enough Hyoga-fics period, let alone ones where he's on the 'receiving' end. ^_^
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